Longing For My Rejected Luna Reviews

Hi found the first part of the story very interesting and enjoyed reading it. I was so heart broken wen her husband treated her so badly and treated that manipulative slut like she was a porcelain doll. The part were the mate bond was was dissolved was very heart breaking. Glad she had her father and brother to go back to. The scene were she and her buddies were drinking in her bedroom was boring after a while it took too many chapters to read the same things repeatedly and I felt was a waste of my coins. Hopefully the book gets interesting from now onwards otherwise not sure if will continue this book. Sorry just my honest opinion.

The story is a good start. It seems to go everywhere all the time. The characters are not well defined it seems like they are all the same person and the author just changed their names. There are numerous inconsistencies such as Jace and Erika. Are they half siblings or step siblings it kept going back and forth on that also their age who’s older. Erika started as an amazing strong woman character then became so whinny when she got back home. We never found out why Jace and Erika can mind link or why it was sometimes working and other times not. We never found out why Alpha Noir’s mom wanted revenge or why Jace mom does. So much, this story had a great first start but a lot seemed rushed

I like that she's finally finding her strength and not a submissive and docile wife. I'd like to see her kick some exhubby ass. I would also like to see her brother Jace stand up a little bit more, maybe let Kat know how he feels. They diffently need to find out how and who in a room full of alphas thier father ended up getting poisoned. And since he was the only one, was the wrong alpha poisoned? We're all the alphas in on it?

This book started off a. bit weird and. boring with a her crying it got to me

At first i already hate Alex so much and really hope Erika will dumped him after he cheated on her with his fake ex- girlfriend. After their divorce and they rejected each other, i wish Erika will find another mate/ man. Turns out to be Alex starting to regret their divorce and how he treated him. Serve him right that Erika doesn’t want to do anything with him. But because of their mate bond they still have lingering feelings for each other. Its kinda happy ending and i love it !

Very entertaining and a good read! Many mistakes which lead me to the conclusion the Author is not an English speaker! Does anyone proof read these novels? Possibly if they were proof read then there would be less mistakes! The major criticism of these novels, the cost is astronomical, most novels are between $7.00 to $12.00 each and it cost me $56 to read it all! The Author keeps the story flowing and interesting, or I wouldn’t have continued to buy credit!

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Wow I am so gripped by this novel already. Erika realises her marriage is doomed by another women and a weak, useless, pathetic husband. Erika decides enough is enough and wants a divorce and a break of the mate bond as Erika has decided to go home and take over her father's pack. When Erika arrives home she is greeted by her father, whom is the Alpha of the most powerful pack in the land. She finally starts to feel safe.....however her father and friends start getting hurt.....I wonder who is causing all these problems for Erika. Could it be her other friend from her ex mates pack, her brother, her ex partner or the other woman....Only time will tell.

I absolutely could not put this novel down... It only took me 4 days to read it all. I love the way the story went, it made you really think what was going to happen next. I'm so glad Selena was killed, I didn't like her she was so evil. I hate that her wolf had to die that broke my heart. I know we had 3 babies because of it but it was sad. I'm so glad they all best friends will raise their children together.

Love this novel so far can’t wait to see what happens and who is trying to get rid of Erika I’m sure it’s the elders daughter or the elder his self I hope Jace finally accepts his mate bond there is a lot going on in the novel and can’t wait to see how it all ends in the end of the novel I’m sure you will love this novel and many more like I do