KING OF ALPHAS. Reviews

This is a very confusing book. It’s well written, interesting, with well developed characters and a confusing magical storyline. If you enjoy stories about Werewolves, Alphas, their Luna’s, along with Mages and other Demons this book has them all. If you enjoy a book with “A Lot” of anger, jealousy, fighting, blood and gut’s this has all that as well. What I did not enjoy about this book was having to constantly reread paragraphs, pages, as well as chapters just to clear up questions in relationship as to what is happening in the story. If your main characters are on their way back to their cabin on a cruise ship then the next paragraph, they’re being rescued from an island…what happened to the ship, why are they being rescued? This sort of thing happened many times during the book. The last few chapters are repeated from a different angle without any change to the story. What a waste of time. The book does end with a cliffhanger. I’m not sure if I want to invest my time in book number two, that is to be decided.

Not really sure where this is going . Obviously the main protagonists , Killian and Vivienne , are meant to be together but they are making heavy weather of it . Their romance is stop start .I am sure there are things that he has not told her ; he seems up front but there is still a certain air of mystery about him . He seems to have problems with his pack but hecalso has people that have his back . She has problems at work and the only person that she trusted completely ( her best friend ) has betrayed her . I wish Killian and Vivienne would get their act together so the stiry can start to move foreward .

Really enjoyed Book 1. Characters are well thought through, intriguing, and insightful. Storyline is well thought out, can be a little repetitive in some chapters, when your paying coins to unlock is very frustrating. I love the dynamics between, humans, werewolves, and scorcerers with vampires thrown into the mix as well. The drama with Fated mates, reincarnation of mates and loss of one's mate keeps the reader focussed on what is evolving next in the story. Can't wait for Book 2

I am really pee'd off right now I can't believe that the Author left the book this way. All I can say is I hope that Book 2 is written better than Book 1. The story was good but there was way too many repeated chapters and that was really getting very old. I hope that Killian destroys Lucian for all the things he did and caused. I hope that Killian and Vivian stay together and have a few pups in the end. And that Christy and Dorian get back together as well.

When I started reading this book I didn't realize the second book was not out yet, so many cliff hangers, so many unanswered questions, I am hoping the second book is not as long as this one. Despite my moaning I did enjoy this book, loved the main characters and every time I thought the writer was going one way they chose a direction that I never saw coming. I am hoping book 2 will give me the same suspense as this book has.

I am lovingthe storyline. Quite intriguing. V has already been through the ringer, but keeps getting up and trudging onward. Even though she feels battered and beaten she picks herself up and moves forward. I am rooting for her and Killian. This new plot twist while she is on a cruise has me worried for her safety as well as her sanity. Hoping Killian shows up to save the day and they can have a happy everafter life together. Love the suspense the author incorporates all through the book

Great book! Good story line and great characters in an interesting world. But poorly edited and put together. Paid twice for quite a few chapters. Chapters were out of place and repeated. It was not edited for grammar or proper spelling. If you’re going to do something, do it right. And now I have to wait until July to read the rest? Not thinking much of this app right now. If you need an editor, get in touch. thevizard

This is one of the most 'I can't wait to finish a story' and an entertaining one. The storyline authors made is great, making readers want to read more and more. A lot of the other stories have been on pause or not getting as much attention due to to me not being able to put this one down. This is exciting I’m almost finished reading as well. I'm keeping up the story and hope it will be a happy ending.

This could of been a brilliant book if the grammer easn't so bad if the chapters did not constantly repeat if we knew before starting that ut was not only half of the story, wrong names written througout. It is wrong to have so many dead ends. You have let the story and the readers down. The book is very slow taking ages to move on going back on itself, no continuity. I will not be reading the second book

The book was alright took too long to get to any plot and it kept repeating itself I used coins a couple of times on the same chapter I already read. Now the story is over with people dead hurt or suffering it’s just too drawn out and vivienne never really gets her powers so the alpha is running around about to die with no help at all smh. The book is just no good enough maybe part two will be better.