KING OF ALPHAS. Reviews

This is a very confusing book. It’s well written, interesting, with well developed characters and a confusing magical storyline. If you enjoy stories about Werewolves, Alphas, their Luna’s, along with Mages and other Demons this book has them all. If you enjoy a book with “A Lot” of anger, jealousy, fighting, blood and gut’s this has all that as well. What I did not enjoy about this book was having to constantly reread paragraphs, pages, as well as chapters just to clear up questions in relationship as to what is happening in the story. If your main characters are on their way back to their cabin on a cruise ship then the next paragraph, they’re being rescued from an island…what happened to the ship, why are they being rescued? This sort of thing happened many times during the book. The last few chapters are repeated from a different angle without any change to the story. What a waste of time. The book does end with a cliffhanger. I’m not sure if I want to invest my time in book number two, that is to be decided.

This could of been a brilliant book if the grammer easn't so bad if the chapters did not constantly repeat if we knew before starting that ut was not only half of the story, wrong names written througout. It is wrong to have so many dead ends. You have let the story and the readers down. The book is very slow taking ages to move on going back on itself, no continuity. I will not be reading the second book

The book was alright took too long to get to any plot and it kept repeating itself I used coins a couple of times on the same chapter I already read. Now the story is over with people dead hurt or suffering it’s just too drawn out and vivienne never really gets her powers so the alpha is running around about to die with no help at all smh. The book is just no good enough maybe part two will be better.

Lovely sweet, exciting, it is fun to read, sometimes it seems like it is written hasty and the storyline could have been more layed out instead of jumping to another "level", but above all it is fun to read, the emotion is something you feel while reading, it gets to you, but as said its somethimes if there are missing parts and more different point of views wich glue it better together. But defenitely curious towards the rest of the book

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This is a rare book. I have no idea where it is heading but the story is very interesting. The main character is human but also an Alpha’s mate. Of course she had no idea his world existed. He clues her in but doesn’t mark her. Looks like that could have been a huge mistake. After her best friend gets her kidnapped her Alpha sends her on a cruise. He was supposed to go to but business kept him from it. Now she’s met a vampire that seems to be interested in her. How will this turn out?

This story improves and gets better with each chapter. It pulls you in with the characters and the plot twists. The female main character is strong, but gets thrown more issues than she deserves but that's what makes this an interesting read. The male main character is wonderfully flaws but too emotionally afraid all the time for my tastes. This is a story i would higly recommend to book lubs amd friends. I would love to see this bookon Kobo or Amazon for sale.

40 chapters in and it rolls, but then you get worried.. There is so much going on and new characters joining in all the time, it kind if freaks you out where the story line goes and can it remain this good as it from the starting point? Or is will it slowly dwindle down into something routine? Will they compete for her? Or are there more then two? Will we have a triangle of love or will they at some point find peaceful existence together?

I loved the story, but i thought there was a lot of repeat in the chapters. I think it could have been a shorter story. I can't wait til book 2 comes out and I hope it's a happy ever after story. I hate that I didn't feel good after reading the book, so I hope after reading book 2 I feel good. That's how I know it's a good story how it makes your emotion go up and down. You have a great imagination for writing books thank you

This novel has continued to hold my interest. I had a couple of other stories in progress but they are now on hold for this one. I enjoy stories that fall in the fantasy realm. I am starting to get a little weary of the main LI constantly disappearing. The repetitive pull/push dynamic can only be tolerated if there is an end in sight. I appreciate that the MC is a strong female lead though she does seem to act like she must solve everything on her own.