KING OF ALPHAS. Reviews

This is a very confusing book. It’s well written, interesting, with well developed characters and a confusing magical storyline. If you enjoy stories about Werewolves, Alphas, their Luna’s, along with Mages and other Demons this book has them all. If you enjoy a book with “A Lot” of anger, jealousy, fighting, blood and gut’s this has all that as well. What I did not enjoy about this book was having to constantly reread paragraphs, pages, as well as chapters just to clear up questions in relationship as to what is happening in the story. If your main characters are on their way back to their cabin on a cruise ship then the next paragraph, they’re being rescued from an island…what happened to the ship, why are they being rescued? This sort of thing happened many times during the book. The last few chapters are repeated from a different angle without any change to the story. What a waste of time. The book does end with a cliffhanger. I’m not sure if I want to invest my time in book number two, that is to be decided.

This story improves and gets better with each chapter. It pulls you in with the characters and the plot twists. The female main character is strong, but gets thrown more issues than she deserves but that's what makes this an interesting read. The male main character is wonderfully flaws but too emotionally afraid all the time for my tastes. This is a story i would higly recommend to book lubs amd friends. I would love to see this bookon Kobo or Amazon for sale.

40 chapters in and it rolls, but then you get worried.. There is so much going on and new characters joining in all the time, it kind if freaks you out where the story line goes and can it remain this good as it from the starting point? Or is will it slowly dwindle down into something routine? Will they compete for her? Or are there more then two? Will we have a triangle of love or will they at some point find peaceful existence together?

I loved the story, but i thought there was a lot of repeat in the chapters. I think it could have been a shorter story. I can't wait til book 2 comes out and I hope it's a happy ever after story. I hate that I didn't feel good after reading the book, so I hope after reading book 2 I feel good. That's how I know it's a good story how it makes your emotion go up and down. You have a great imagination for writing books thank you

This novel has continued to hold my interest. I had a couple of other stories in progress but they are now on hold for this one. I enjoy stories that fall in the fantasy realm. I am starting to get a little weary of the main LI constantly disappearing. The repetitive pull/push dynamic can only be tolerated if there is an end in sight. I appreciate that the MC is a strong female lead though she does seem to act like she must solve everything on her own.

Im really enjoying this book , but if im honest , its dragging on . Im on chapter 40 now . I wish the apha would stop running away and leaving vivian alone . The chapters are really short too . Now theres a vampire on the scene to stir it up so im wondering who she will end up with . She isnt very lucky so far so hopefully her luck changes on the cruise ship and she makes real friends .

This is an up and down rollercoaster it goes from hot to cold but then , crazy but all in good way s I'm really hoping that it doesn't end too soon or VERY cliche but who's not a fan of that but it's always better when there's more twists and turn's before they finally decide if they're going keep it together or fall completely apart but gu ess I still have a few more chapters to actually find out

Honestly the book is not what I expected. there is a plot but it seems to going every which way . Some chapters make sense and others don't. Hopefully the book gets better with time and patience because that is what you are going to need to read it . The author seems to be working a the plot and the chapters in the story so thats a plus . Honestly if you want a slow burn story then this is the one for you . If not I would skip it because there is a slow burn and then there is this story .

I like this one, it is exciting and keeps you wanting more. However, it does jump about a bit, often with no explanation. I assume that is to keep you guessing. I’m at the part where Killian has just evaporated from the story and now there is a new character Drey the vampire. I like Killian, I hope he comes back soon. I loved the romantic parts of the story and the detail is great. It makes me want to go and visit Venice.

So far so good. I really hope vivi and Killian can complete there bond and be together. I hope she can over come what her supposedly best friend leona did to her. I hope she can still be the strong CEO that she was and run her company especially if she becomes one with Killian and moves to Italy. Thats just my hope. Hopefully the books stays good and keeps getting good. 💖 💚 💜 🩵 💕 ❤️ 🥰