His rejected mate Reviews

I hope the next book is as good as the first book. It's was just long enough and expland both side of the families from Freya to Dominic to the parents and siblings. It was exciting and real like real life for them. This book is one that I would recommend to family or friends that read romance novels. I've read hundreds of novels and this is one of my favorites. I'm going to readbthe second one right after this review. Thanks

This has multi layers conflict passion and generational intrigue I have thoroughly enjoyed it ticked all my boxes. Well written hate grammatical errors real destroyer for me. It ended with a bang too so did not fizzle out so right up to the end wanted to read more will not discuss story line as personally I don’t want to know before I read something but intrigue sex and family conflict makes it more than just readable makes it a page turner.

This novel could use some serious editing. The tenses, names, spelling, repetitive language, and common errors made it frustrating to read. I also was not expecting the 2 in 1 story. The first part of the story was interesting, which is why I kept reading, regardless of all the errors. Second part seemed forced, ruined it for me. This novel has great potential (if editing is done!) and if the first part of the story with Dominic and Freya is the only story being told.

This is a very hard to read story. It goes from Freya outside to leave the pack and the next thing she is in a bedroom. It has Dominic having her leave, then all of a sudden he's places her on his bed. Seriously some consistency and flow would be nice. Freya needs to make up her mind on if she wants Dominic or not. Dominic needs to figure his own head out. And Linda just needs to get lost

It’s a great novel so far! Can’t wait to continue to read it more, it’s the kind of novel that keep pulling you in more and more! I also like the option of viewing videos to unlock a chapter it’s quick and easy & it gets you unlimited reads while you save up your daily coins! I also like the fact that theirs so many different kinds of novels to read it’s pretty exciting! Good app

This novel has kept me on my toes. Love it and the feminine heroine!!! To see her transformation is miraculous and now I can’t stop reading to see what voices next! Where is her matter? The tension is killing me!!! She’s got to find him and she is going to have to take control in order to save this pack, one she has put behind her and moved on from. Well she keep struggling to be the Luna she needs the pack to be!!!

Really loving it! Great immersion and good story line. Really recommend it! The way the story builds its plot and the characters are very good and it leaves you wondering through the story what will happen next. You get to live with the characters throughout the developments and see it unfold as you read. Also it's very easy to read the story and because of that I really love it! I'm not done with the book but I already know that I will hate fot it to end.

Few confusing sentences but good story so far. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Will add more when finished reading. . . . . . . .

I really enjoyed this novel. It was nice seeing all of the twists and turns this novel took, especially with Lily and the twin Alphas. It's too bad that it had to end with her being pregnant. It would be nice to see what life had in store for this new family. I'm glad that they were able to take down the dark witches and prove that they were lying about the toxins that would eventually cause so much unhappiness for everyone involved.

I’m loving the energy of Freya/Alice. I loved it when she let Linda have it and got more strength from her. Now I just wish Alpha Dominic and Freya would mark each other and live a happy life with Matthew. I hope Freya and Matthew stay in Alpha Dominic’s pack and do not return to their old pack. They need to be a family and Freya needs to discover what other powers she has along with Matthew.