His Discarded Luna, Returns with secret Pups Reviews

Overall it was a good novel. It was a bit different because the sexual scenes were very tame. There were parts in the novel that made it hard to stop reading. And then there were some repetitious parts and chapters that made me do a double take and wondering if I was in a zone of the “did I touch something that made the chapter repeat? I also felt like the parts of the chapters that switched between scenes and characters should be separated. I spent a lot of time wondering why people were being called by different names, I didn’t realize that the writer was switching between scenes and stories. I wish the Derrick could have been saved and be given a second chance mate. Believe it or not I felt sorry for Bella, this is where the class system gets to me. However, I understand that she was disreputable and evil. She could have been afforded a good life. Like getting someone who could love her without her having to drug them for their affection. Jasmine’s story could have been explored to unearth the true nature of what really happened to her instead of skirting around the issue of child sexual abuse. Once again a good book and the writer did a good job of segueing into the various scenes and bringing in the different characters.

This is an excellent story that I wish would be completed so I don’t have to keep waiting for the next chapter. Excellent plot that keeps me checking if the story been updated and only two chapters at a time 😫!!! It has a great plot, suspenseful, excellent characters that you connect with and excited to see what happens next. Although this has taught me to check the story summary and make sure to read completed books only because I am not a patient person. Kudos to the author so far, just finish the book please!!!!