Her Desired Alphas Reviews

Book 5 of 8. This ones a great plot been building since book 2 & 4, now getting to be awesome. So many emotions for Marabella, such a different young woman, she is so kind of heart, yet so lonely, bullied all her life with a family who have no idea how to teach, support or love her unconditionally. I have cried, laughed and raged at some of the characters, but at last she is finding her "people" who love her". Stay Strong Marabella, you've got this.

Kyan is really pissing me off. I can’t believe that I’m actually liking Kaif more than it’s so frustrating he is taking his vision to heart. I wished Mara will open up more to her mom about this situation. Then she can share her vision and how it was all that’s he thought. Yes Mateo died but she was able to get him to come back. She did have to sacrifice her dad but the vision is exactly what it seemed.

The story is written very well. Not the amount of grammar mistakes in a lot of other novels on this abb. The story does not drag bit just goes on on and you just can't put it away! I love the way the author let's the characters evolve. But also how old characters come back when you are reading a sequel. I really really recommend this author. And the books are not a like. Evwry one is different and wants you to keep reading 📚

There is ONE editing misshapen between chapters 37 and 38 where whole paragraphs are out of order and part of chapter 8 ended up smooshed in the middle of chapter 37 that made reading it very difficult if someone could go in and edit that it would be much appreciated, especially with as many coins as you have to spend on these books. Overall great story, kinda confusing but still good. The whole series so far as been better than most.

Overall good. I do fell like some chapters weren’t needed or could’ve been added on to others. At this point I expected Marabella and Kyan to be a little closer. Kaif marking Jonah was unexpected. I kind of wished at least Ezra would’ve stood up for Marabella. Everybody being afraid of her after the challenge was annoying. I also thought her and mother would have had more interaction by now. Her travel to the Goddess realm or something.

So far I am more intrigued in this story than entertained by it. Yes I just want them all to get together and let the sexy action begin as I think their attraction is powerful but also endearing as I think there is a higher purpose to their connection. Hit the intriguing part is their magic and how that plus it’s part in their story. The mystery is good but I just want Kyan to show her how much he wants her and how deep his feelings are for her.

This series is just the right amount of fantasy,sex,and intrigue. I have read several werewolf novels but I have never laughed out loud as much as reading this one. I loved the interaction of the characters it was very entertaining. The sex were not overdone and added to the story not just a side distraction. Ready to start into the next book.I hope there is more or Mara story in the next book.Thanks, keep on writing ...looking forward to it.

love the series!! ive never read a book series so fast in my life i cant wait to keep reading !! pleaseeeeee right more books like this i would read them all. i cant wait to see the love blossom between her, kyan, and jonah. her story is so heartbreaking and heartwarming, i want to not be mad at kat and mateo and ezra but i am, they treated her differently and didnt care enough to notice she was drowning how awful.

Wow, wow, wow. Ryan loves Mara, Marbella, Bella, what ever he is calling her at the moment. Then he hates her and his Lycan Kaif pouts & wants Mara’s wolf Kora. What a slutty little wolf. Ha ha ha. Then Ryan and Marbella discover Ryan’s dad Dominic in Marbella’s head giving her spells to use on Ryan and Kaif. Then dear Jonah is in the middle of them with them all marking each other. Humm, that sounds like some other people I know. You’ll love it. On to the next book

It just stopped. There was no ending. No resolution. This is part of a book. Not a complete book! The description says it is completed. Where is the rest of the story? I only started it because the description says it is complete. The description talks about a mystery and the search for a solution. It ends with a mundane phone call. What the heck! And, why do I have to come up with eighty words to describe how angry you have made me with this incomplete mess?