Her Desired Alphas Reviews

Great continuation of the story! Loved this book & so happy it wasn't heartbreaking as the last! Gosh did I laugh! Kora may not remember her pervious lives, but still has the same great personality. So happy someone finally spoke up to Kat about what Marabella was actually going through & hiding and their willingness to ignore the signs of depression. I had a feeling Dominic attached himself to Marabella when he sacrificed himself so she could live... I hope she learns too control her powers 🤞 Eziah has seem to grow up to be a spoiled Momma's boy...

I have quite enjoyed this book. The absolute ignoring of this child was heartbreaking right from the beginning! Her parents were terrified of her, other children were terrified of her and she was forced to wear gloves all of the time. She had one friend, her uncle Andrei’s adopted son and the son of the man, Dominic,who died protecting her, they were never afraid of her? Until she was 13 she called both friends, but then Dom’s son started keeping away from her when he had a vision of killing her! 😳 Read on if you want to see where and how they wind up!

Book 5 of 8. This ones a great plot been building since book 2 & 4, now getting to be awesome. So many emotions for Marabella, such a different young woman, she is so kind of heart, yet so lonely, bullied all her life with a family who have no idea how to teach, support or love her unconditionally. I have cried, laughed and raged at some of the characters, but at last she is finding her "people" who love her". Stay Strong Marabella, you've got this.

Kyan is really pissing me off. I can’t believe that I’m actually liking Kaif more than it’s so frustrating he is taking his vision to heart. I wished Mara will open up more to her mom about this situation. Then she can share her vision and how it was all that’s he thought. Yes Mateo died but she was able to get him to come back. She did have to sacrifice her dad but the vision is exactly what it seemed.

The story is written very well. Not the amount of grammar mistakes in a lot of other novels on this abb. The story does not drag bit just goes on on and you just can't put it away! I love the way the author let's the characters evolve. But also how old characters come back when you are reading a sequel. I really really recommend this author. And the books are not a like. Evwry one is different and wants you to keep reading 📚

There is ONE editing misshapen between chapters 37 and 38 where whole paragraphs are out of order and part of chapter 8 ended up smooshed in the middle of chapter 37 that made reading it very difficult if someone could go in and edit that it would be much appreciated, especially with as many coins as you have to spend on these books. Overall great story, kinda confusing but still good. The whole series so far as been better than most.

Overall good. I do fell like some chapters weren’t needed or could’ve been added on to others. At this point I expected Marabella and Kyan to be a little closer. Kaif marking Jonah was unexpected. I kind of wished at least Ezra would’ve stood up for Marabella. Everybody being afraid of her after the challenge was annoying. I also thought her and mother would have had more interaction by now. Her travel to the Goddess realm or something.

So far I am more intrigued in this story than entertained by it. Yes I just want them all to get together and let the sexy action begin as I think their attraction is powerful but also endearing as I think there is a higher purpose to their connection. Hit the intriguing part is their magic and how that plus it’s part in their story. The mystery is good but I just want Kyan to show her how much he wants her and how deep his feelings are for her.

This series is just the right amount of fantasy,sex,and intrigue. I have read several werewolf novels but I have never laughed out loud as much as reading this one. I loved the interaction of the characters it was very entertaining. The sex were not overdone and added to the story not just a side distraction. Ready to start into the next book.I hope there is more or Mara story in the next book.Thanks, keep on writing ...looking forward to it.

love the series!! ive never read a book series so fast in my life i cant wait to keep reading !! pleaseeeeee right more books like this i would read them all. i cant wait to see the love blossom between her, kyan, and jonah. her story is so heartbreaking and heartwarming, i want to not be mad at kat and mateo and ezra but i am, they treated her differently and didnt care enough to notice she was drowning how awful.