He Chose First Love, I Chose the Alpha King Reviews

Great strong characters & interesting story line. The family & ex story line are a bit long & dragged out but the rest is an interesting wee story. Great strong characters & interesting story line. The family & ex story line are a bit long & dragged out but the rest is an interesting wee story. Great strong characters & interesting story line. The family & ex story line are a bit long & dragged out but the rest is an interesting wee story. A gentle read but enjoyable.

He Chose His First Love, I Chose Alpha King is a gripping paranormal romance filled with betrayal, heartbreak, and fierce redemption. The story follows a heroine who refuses to beg for love after being rejected for a “first love.” Instead, she rises stronger and finds herself entangled with a powerful, commanding Alpha King. The emotional tension is intense, and the romance burns with possessive, protective energy. It’s a satisfying tale of self-worth, revenge, and choosing power over pain—perfect for fans of dramatic werewolf love stories.

This book even with its turns and everything is still super interesting and draws you in . I can’t wait for the hat is to come in the following chapters as the twists and turns continue to take place. With were I am currently in the book I have so many questions of what’s took and how everything is to be changed in the following chapters. What will happen? Who will get hurt? It’s only a matter of time before everything falls into place

I liked this book. Considering it feels like this is the first book of a series I wish the author would have started with a bit more of the beginning because I think it would have been interesting and could have maybe made the story better. I also think that it would be nice to not have so have so many lose ends in the story right now... If there's not a sequel already I really would hope it comes asap.

Interesting take on a female Alpha, bit frustrating with her back and forth, for an Alpha make a choice and stick with it!!! The contrast between her personal undecided personality and her professional go getter is a bit frustrating. Overall enjoyable book, I would like to read about their happy ending. And have Selene meet her match after all that scheming. Few phrases kept repeating that I think can be smoothed over by proper editing of the completed book. All in all a thumbs up.

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This book has kept me totally enthralled. I cannot wait to read more. I am waiting so patiently for Sivi to realize she is in love with the Alpha King. The family dynamics remind me of true life events. The jealousy and betrayal between the siblings makes it hard to believe that they were raised by the same mother. All the evil characters in this book just shows that you can't trust everyone. I hope the second book is even better.

I love the storyline and is excited to see how it all unfolds. The suspense is keeping it interesting and I know it's part of the build up but it takes so long to finish the novel with the amount of coins required to read the next chapter unless you give out money. It would be nice if the chapter were cheaper. Other than that I love the storyline. And I am glad that she found someone that supports her and not use her for their advantage.

Some of the chapters are filler and slow the story down so the flow is thrown off. If you do not mind that is ok. Introducing new characters mid story makes it hard to follow who I who especially when there are chapters developing the new characters. Since my brain is able to hold all the individual characters and how they interact together it does not bother me as much as other readers. Overall the story is good and I can follow it fine.

Book was a scattered mess. So many inconsistencies. Basically all sex and confusion. The story line kept losing pace and sequences. Chapters repeated themselves constantly - wasted money. I understand the concept, however, the detailed/plot were not planned out. It appears to just be thrown together without even editing. Sections seem misplaced and out of order. Basic details conflicted. For 136 chapters we were reminded she suppresses her alpha wolf for 3 years. It talks about her reclaiming her power then the next chapter she acts like an omega. Makes absolutely zero sense. Constant conflicts with the mate bond, conversations, just — everything. This book was horribly difficult to read. I will not be reading the “continuation” if it’s anything like this one.