Get Back The Abandoned Luna Reviews

This story has me wanting more. Alexander is like so many men who marry to make themselves look good with no real regard for their wife. Alexander reaps the rewards of her hard work and devotion. When his old flame who threw him aside comes back and looks his way, he plays and justifies himself by blaming it on his wife. It’s her fault he is a cheating slug of a man. I can’t wait to see how the author ultimately takes him to task and his wife comes into her own.

Not bad, but first, I hate these novels that don’t finish. Because this one isn’t, it’s another novel site I will NOT return to! Second, the book wandered over too many issues. It was fun to read, but won’t read from this site again. We either pay more than a normal novel to read or have to watch videos and collect coins, which is a piss off. You guys need to be more like Amazon readers and just charge a nominal fee to read a completed book. So frustrating, one reader lost.

This is one of the best books I’ve read in a while. Keeps my attention. Highly recommended. The characters are amazing. I love to see what Lucien will do next. Will he hold his control or take her at the least expected time. I can’t wait til she rejects that low life. I hope they have a huge and beautiful wedding. Honeymoon on a beautiful tropical island where they can stay on the beach or in bed all day. Whatever wolfs like best. Wink… Wink….

The novel is great but there are a lot of inconsistencies. At the beginning it says that scarlet and Kathleen were best friends and helped contact Lucien for help, but later it says they are strangers. It also said that Lucien abandoned scarlet when they were younger then she got in an arranged marriage with Alexander. Later that is ruled out and it turned into scarlet falling in love with Alexander when she was younger then. Next Lucien invites scarlet to a small gathering of alphas to promote her bill but that storyline is abandoned and it turns into a gala for all alphas. I really like the story but I would love it if these inconsistencies were resolved.

Reads awkward because not edited well. Slows down the story. Plot and subplots are complicated and melodramatic but intriguing, like a soap opera. I keep reading because links between the characters and their conflicts are fascinating. The romantic connection enhances the emotion and adds a contrast to the violence. Layers of conflict - external physical contact, battles and wars, internal struggles, deep emotions, love, self-doubt, and the stress of leadership - intertwine tempting the reader forward. It is plausible to accept the magic and fantasy, but confusing to include the shifts between past and present times with modern transportation and phones but living in medieval settings, riding horses, using swords, using candles. I can’t imagine the costumes. These conflicts confuse the reader and makes transition difficult.

So far, the storyline is very good. However, the author doesn’t seem to be keeping up with her own narrative and continues to repeat scenes from one chapter to another, but incorrectly. Otherwise, the characters are well described and well developed. The storyline is very interesting and different from many of the other books I have read over the years. I am hoping that the story will continue to grow and the ending will be as interesting as the story has been.

Good plot and well written. Not just another trope with the names changed or constantly changing fron chapter to chapter. Needs a little tighter editing to make it follow better. Nice to have stories about strong independent women who are working to better the lives of all women and to provide a safe haven for those who are unable to stand up for themselves in a society that accepts that women remain second class citizens. Interesting that women’s rights still remain a battleground after 60 years of women’s rights .

Great read! Loved the twists and turns! Little rough on grammar, if you are open to constructive criticism. Loved the story line though! I will say, I don't like there is a minimum amount of words to leave a review though. I'm always straight and to the point with how I feel about things. At this point I'm just typing words so my review will post. I really did like the novel. I'm tired of reading the same novel but with different names!

Great looking to start kept you on your toes you never knew what was going to happen the last part wasn't as great as I thought it might be still a good book good read I would recommend it I just wish there'd been more about how they have a life with the baby and how everything that there was more happier parts to it it seemed like every time you turn around there was something bad going on they didn't ever just have a good healthy happy family I wish they would have shown that more

I like how strong Scarlet is. I really do not understand why she is not rejecting her husband at this time. I think there might have been something in her drink to cause her to almost down. The book is a little bit drawn out, but it does not really go from one point of view to the other and repeat everything the first person said. All the chapters could be longer, but then again the ads would be less.