Get Back The Abandoned Luna Reviews

So far, the storyline is very good. However, the author doesn’t seem to be keeping up with her own narrative and continues to repeat scenes from one chapter to another, but incorrectly. Otherwise, the characters are well described and well developed. The storyline is very interesting and different from many of the other books I have read over the years. I am hoping that the story will continue to grow and the ending will be as interesting as the story has been.

Good plot and well written. Not just another trope with the names changed or constantly changing fron chapter to chapter. Needs a little tighter editing to make it follow better. Nice to have stories about strong independent women who are working to better the lives of all women and to provide a safe haven for those who are unable to stand up for themselves in a society that accepts that women remain second class citizens. Interesting that women’s rights still remain a battleground after 60 years of women’s rights .

Great read! Loved the twists and turns! Little rough on grammar, if you are open to constructive criticism. Loved the story line though! I will say, I don't like there is a minimum amount of words to leave a review though. I'm always straight and to the point with how I feel about things. At this point I'm just typing words so my review will post. I really did like the novel. I'm tired of reading the same novel but with different names!

Great looking to start kept you on your toes you never knew what was going to happen the last part wasn't as great as I thought it might be still a good book good read I would recommend it I just wish there'd been more about how they have a life with the baby and how everything that there was more happier parts to it it seemed like every time you turn around there was something bad going on they didn't ever just have a good healthy happy family I wish they would have shown that more

I like how strong Scarlet is. I really do not understand why she is not rejecting her husband at this time. I think there might have been something in her drink to cause her to almost down. The book is a little bit drawn out, but it does not really go from one point of view to the other and repeat everything the first person said. All the chapters could be longer, but then again the ads would be less.

Penreliever has crafted both a heart-breaking and heart-warming spell of words to keep any reader wanting more of the story to satisfy the pangs of curiousity for how it all ends! As I continue on my journey with Scarlett, in finding her love taken advantage of by a sleazy man and then rebuilding her backbone and heart with new friends and a newly refound love, I find my heart breaking and then pounding and then laughing all in short order as she stumbled through the hardships of life. Love to keep reading this novel by Penreliever and hope to enjoy much more in the days to come! 🥰👏🫶

Really enjoying the story! Maybe a few plot holes or inconsistencies but over all it’s been enjoyable up to this point. I had been avoiding the alpha wolf stories but this one is good. I enjoy this story. The characters are varied and the relationships are interesting. It’s really easy to be angry at that characters you’re supposed to be angry at. This is the first story I’ve reviewed. I don’t know how May chapters there are

I like that Scarlett is fighting not just for herself but others. My bet is Lucien knew when they were younger but was not ready and getting usurped by Alexander only to have him betray her will not end well. Kathleen needs a suburb mate. Please do not leave that danglying thread. Jack also needs a wonderful mate but not Kathleen. I do not wish harm to come to the pup, but it should be a she. And a gentle mate for the abused luna who Scarlett has taken a liking to at the alpha conference, who also went to Lucien to help Scarlett. I bet she and Kathleen will have a great friendship as well.

I enjoyed reading this story, although parts of the bonus chapters seemed to have been written by someone else. I’m not sure I enjoyed those. Bearing in mind that Lucien was sold to us as a conqueror he very quickly became a pussy cat to Scarlet, that was very amusing. In fact when he went to war we hardly heard anything about it. Fortunately Scarlet was quite formidable in her own right so perhaps that saved it for me.

Love this I just want to keep on reading as to know what will happen. I love the way they express they're feelings and emotions it feels if I am in the story myself.I hope this will work out for her to be the true Luna and that she found her true mate. For the other part of her pack that she will be their leader and have her own pack back without Alexander or Fae no where near or even gone