Get Back The Abandoned Luna Reviews

Really enjoying the story! Maybe a few plot holes or inconsistencies but over all it’s been enjoyable up to this point. I had been avoiding the alpha wolf stories but this one is good. I enjoy this story. The characters are varied and the relationships are interesting. It’s really easy to be angry at that characters you’re supposed to be angry at. This is the first story I’ve reviewed. I don’t know how May chapters there are

I like that Scarlett is fighting not just for herself but others. My bet is Lucien knew when they were younger but was not ready and getting usurped by Alexander only to have him betray her will not end well. Kathleen needs a suburb mate. Please do not leave that danglying thread. Jack also needs a wonderful mate but not Kathleen. I do not wish harm to come to the pup, but it should be a she. And a gentle mate for the abused luna who Scarlett has taken a liking to at the alpha conference, who also went to Lucien to help Scarlett. I bet she and Kathleen will have a great friendship as well.

I enjoyed reading this story, although parts of the bonus chapters seemed to have been written by someone else. I’m not sure I enjoyed those. Bearing in mind that Lucien was sold to us as a conqueror he very quickly became a pussy cat to Scarlet, that was very amusing. In fact when he went to war we hardly heard anything about it. Fortunately Scarlet was quite formidable in her own right so perhaps that saved it for me.

Love this I just want to keep on reading as to know what will happen. I love the way they express they're feelings and emotions it feels if I am in the story myself.I hope this will work out for her to be the true Luna and that she found her true mate. For the other part of her pack that she will be their leader and have her own pack back without Alexander or Fae no where near or even gone

I wish it didn't end, it was fantastic!! Such a great love story and of survival, very well written!! I fell in love with all the main characters, waiting to see the outcomes of each different situation. Very glad that the bad people in here got what they deserve, even though it took longer than I would have wrote it lol. But I do want to applaud the author, very well though process and very well written. Still wish there was more!!

This book is about a betrayed Luna that won't take the betrayal sitting down. Her journey to change the rules regarding the treatment of Lunas will take the reader through twists and turns. Her determination to save herself, fellow Lunas and future Lunas will cost her reputation to take a hit from false accusations. Fighting politically for al she- wolves to be seen as equals takes her through a an unexpected journey that makes wonder if a certain Alpha is her true mate.

It is a bit confusing, as if English is not the original language of the author, a lot of spelling mistakes. What is even more confusing is it seems the writer has forgotten information given in previous chapters and suddenly gives completely different details. Like the sister of Lucien, I thought when Scarlett first called to ask for help, she'd called Kathleen and referred to her as her best friend. But suddenly when she encounters Kathleen in person it is a meeting for the first time?

Strong women whose men aren’t intimidated by them. Great characters and plot twists. Scarlet’s pain, fortitude, and strength in dissolving the bond was both heartbreaking and inspiring. Female friendships were real and heart warming. Lucien was a bit of an enigma at first but loved how his perception and view of Scarlet evolved. The evil😉 Natasha aka Scarlett’s grandmother was a hoot especially after the “kidnapping” following Lucien and Scarlett’s bonding ceremony. Loved how the evil one was really a softie!

The plot is pretty standard for this genre- scorned woman keeps her dignity and finds new partner worthy of her, gets revenge etc. It holds the reader’s attention but there are too many syntactical and grammatical errors- people change their names, even genders! The most glaring inconsistency is one of time- the heroine uses a mobile phone and rides in an SUV, but later there are scribes who record the council meetings with quill pens and ink pots, and lighting is from torches and candlelight. The last few chapters read as if someone else added them on.

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