Four Mates and A Rogue Reviews

This novel had such a promising premise, with potential for lots of spiciness, but it ended up really annoying me. Reckon it was written with AI as sentence structure was very repetitive. Chapters were repeated or completely out of sequence. Lots of continuity issues or complete plot holes. Virtually a third of way through before first sex scene, and was rather dissappointing. Not to spoil, but title is wrong and no appropriate grief or recognition given. Regret buying all the chapters.

I loved the story and the characters. But did you read it all the way through when it was completed? There was times where it was almost the exactly chapter over and over again. One minute you are saying the baby is a girl then the next it is a boy. Then always referring to the baby as they , them. That is the plural making it sounds like had more than 1 baby. Seemed like multiple people were writing this book or con7multiple books together You could have finished this book in 75 chapters with all the repeating

It’s great novel but don’t have a clear reception yet. So far it’s a great novel but I still rather give my honest opinion after I’ve read further into it. It’s great they welcomed a rogue into the group as most look down on those and there clearly some good in all people. Seems the rogue is gonna be clearly a great leader for this group as of yet but I’ll give better opinion later on

The story started out strong but fell into repetitive patterns. So many pages with one word sentences to take up space got very boring quickly. I like a strong heroine and there was until after the climax of the battles fought and then everything peaceful. Thats when the writing just goes down hill. Grammar issues riddle every page. Pronouns not worded correctly hard to follow who is being discussed. Several time shifts where suddenly you go back and are reading events again but with little changes Someone in labor the next chapter they are still pregnant as example… I would pass on wasting you time or money on this one.

Great easy to read story. Chapters are a little short though. Gd plot and gd characters . Would like to know more about her though and where she comes from and why rogue’s can’t be mated to pack wolves. It’s only my second book on this app and think it’s quite cheap to buy the chapters compared to other sites that offer the same thing… timeline in this story is a little all o er the place in parts.

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I really enjoyed this novel(except for the mix up of the men’s names in the last few chapters).I love the way Raven described everything the men did when telling her story.The story started out great,her being a rouge,on the run from the dreaded council,then meeting the Alphas and then realising that she had no one but four mates.The battle reads were so realistic and the way that even their looks on the alphas faces was well described.By far one of the best novels I have read.

A good read, an awful lot of repetition though, which does nothing to advance the story, in fact it's a bit irritating as you feel like the author is using 'filler' chapters just to extend the book. We meet Raven, a rogue, who has spent her life on the run after her parents are murdered, she stumbles into the pack lands, while running from a rogue party working for the council. There she meets her mates, and slowly they start to win her trust, especially after she is kidnapped by the council, and then rescued by her mates.

It starts out super well, grabbed my attention, and yet Would like to see move POVs. I would’ve also really enjoyed seeing more resistance from her and more hidden truths about her past. Such as why did the uncle want to kill her, & what is so important about her? I am left with more wants and questions but over all, I really enjoy it. I go to bed thinking about it and wake up excited to read more. I have noticed I’m more saddened to stop reading, due to the lack of answers.