Four Mates and A Rogue Reviews

Great story line. The chapters are way too short. It is draining my coin balance way too much. The author could have spent a bit more time going into the relationship with each mate a bit more instead of grouping them together. Aside from the chapters being way too short it is a good read. The story line has great potential and leaves a lot of room to go in any direction. I hope the chapters get longer. The chapters do repeat themselves a little bit. I like the characters they have a lot of potential.

So far it is good. A little slow. No outward spice. Battles but not a ton of gore ( compared to some books). I wish I knew how old these characters were. Is weird to me that she is back in school. So far it is good. A little slow. No outward spice. Battles but not a ton of gore ( compared to some books). So far it is good. A little slow. No outward spice. Battles but not a ton of gore ( compared to some books).

My review so far of this novel well the characters are interesting enough each one with a different set of personality. The basis for the story is alittle lacking when it comes to Raven. There isnt enough back ground yet to know why people are after her! Iam sure we will know soon as to why she is wanted. The guys are pretty standard with their personalities as seen in many multiple partner stories. The grammar and spelling are pretty good unlike some that I have read.

This novel had such a promising premise, with potential for lots of spiciness, but it ended up really annoying me. Reckon it was written with AI as sentence structure was very repetitive. Chapters were repeated or completely out of sequence. Lots of continuity issues or complete plot holes. Virtually a third of way through before first sex scene, and was rather dissappointing. Not to spoil, but title is wrong and no appropriate grief or recognition given. Regret buying all the chapters.

I loved the story and the characters. But did you read it all the way through when it was completed? There was times where it was almost the exactly chapter over and over again. One minute you are saying the baby is a girl then the next it is a boy. Then always referring to the baby as they , them. That is the plural making it sounds like had more than 1 baby. Seemed like multiple people were writing this book or con7multiple books together You could have finished this book in 75 chapters with all the repeating

It’s great novel but don’t have a clear reception yet. So far it’s a great novel but I still rather give my honest opinion after I’ve read further into it. It’s great they welcomed a rogue into the group as most look down on those and there clearly some good in all people. Seems the rogue is gonna be clearly a great leader for this group as of yet but I’ll give better opinion later on

The story started out strong but fell into repetitive patterns. So many pages with one word sentences to take up space got very boring quickly. I like a strong heroine and there was until after the climax of the battles fought and then everything peaceful. Thats when the writing just goes down hill. Grammar issues riddle every page. Pronouns not worded correctly hard to follow who is being discussed. Several time shifts where suddenly you go back and are reading events again but with little changes Someone in labor the next chapter they are still pregnant as example… I would pass on wasting you time or money on this one.

Great easy to read story. Chapters are a little short though. Gd plot and gd characters . Would like to know more about her though and where she comes from and why rogue’s can’t be mated to pack wolves. It’s only my second book on this app and think it’s quite cheap to buy the chapters compared to other sites that offer the same thing… timeline in this story is a little all o er the place in parts.

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