Fighting Zephyrus - The Indomitable Alpha Reviews

Loved it but I thought alpha was very possessive and often very grumpy. It seems like it was all about him at stages, but it was definitely a Page Turner, and you definitely wanted more you wanted more and more. I would’ve loved to see Luna have her babies and see how she handled that and see what happened with the school that once opened, I would’ve loved to see Luna have more choices on her own and not feel like she was forced to do things

Interesting so far, although the storyline could have been more detailed during certain sub plots, instead of feeling like a contrived plot to just move the story along. For example, the author should have concentrated on the sub plot regarding the killing of the Magnus, making it more believable and more interesting. Also, this character seems very one-dimensional and needed a more in-depth characterization. Furthermore, this antagonist plays a pivotal role in both of the main character’s back stories, yet feels neglected and/or like an afterthought of the author who is more focused on the main characters and their mate bond.

This novel has an interesting storyline. It is written well with few grammatical errors. A lot of action happens in a short period of time. So the reading goes fast. I find though that the leading male gets too mad too often in the beginning of the book regarding his mate. He is always storming off instead of taking time to talk to his mate or allow her to explain anything. He is constantly jumping to conclusions. Once he settles down and gets to know his mate the story progresses easier. Overall a good book so far.

This was a unique and really interesting story. I like the love story between Lena and Zephyrus. The writer has quite the imagination with the introduction of different mythical creatures. I just wished Lena made Zephyrus work really hard to make her fall in love with him after he put her through that torture. It was too easy for him. Also, Lena appeared too weak even though she was supposed to be a strong warrior, after training all her life. Overall it was a great write up. There wasn't that problem of grammatical errors and the story wasn't too long.

Great novel so far. I am enjoying the book . The story is great so far and the characters are very well written. The story line is well constructed and riveting. I can't wait to see what happens throughout the rest of the book. I enjoy a lot of different werewolf stories and this one is written from a unique perspective with a different storyline than any of the stories I have had the privilege of reading. I'm very interested to see where it takes me in the future.

Initially it was the battle that got my attention when she fought Zeph and felt the bond but wasn't sure and she still kept fighting him. I always like a little bit of defiance to their mate, keeps it real, makes him want her more!! Haha!! She kept him waiting for a while though, and I started to get feel his sadness and thought, you can give in now gurl to the mate bond. Now I'm keen to find out who this voice is? Is the voice near?, closer to the pack lands now? I'm.addicted!!

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I love it 😍 I could read it over and over again. The emotions portrayed in this book feels so real. I am pissed that she was cold harted,I am sad that he had to go through his struggles alone,I am happy that she and he have such supportive friends who are always there for them. Goes to show we can't always fight out own battles but need people who love us help us through. Still reading though..hope they end up together and that you to the writer who did an excellent job

This is one of a hit 🎯! Captivating, intriguing and spell bounding from the first page. One can't stop wishing these novels be made into movies. The storyline is gripping. The plot seamlessly flowing into one another. The twists and turns keeps you glued to the letters...who would have thought! Although Lena needs to be forthcoming, albeit in such circumstance one might not be thinking straight. She could only get the help she needed if she opened up All in all it was a great job.

When you start reading it, you enter the realm of adventure and fantasy. It is a unique feeling of happiness that can reach the absolute only if you let your imagination carry you through this land. Reading the lines of this book and understanding the fantastic in its lines, you can look at life with different eyes. Even if we no longer believe in fantasy worlds with the progress, this book makes you believe that the world of fantasy has not disappeared anywhere