Fated and Knocked Up by the Alpha King Reviews

So sad the way the writer keeps telling the same thing what happens but with different people. It makes the storyline confusing and ruins what could have been a good story. I hope it is because it was the writers first story. If not too bad because the story is ruined by the way everything keeping repeating itself. To many coins for keeping us to read the same thing so many times. I sounds like the writer needed to fill in more word 😞

This book began good but floundered after they moved into the palace. The constant 'like a' statements, broken sentences which didn't help to explain the events that were being talked about; the story took a downward spiral that I wasn't expecting. They were some really good parts but I wish it was enough to recover the story line, I was holding out hope. I did love the relationship began Thorne and Elara and the little comedian they created. I loved Thorne's unrelenting desire to bring his mate and son home, also how he was ready to do any and everything to keep them safe.

Loved this but wanted more of a love story with them! But would read it again!!! Great story! The characters were rich and developed but I wanted more of a love story between Elara and Thorne… possibly to even see them mated and to see what became of her former lover. I hope there is definitely more to come for this book and author or maybe another book that gives us the ending of how the war went and the romance!!!! Such a great read!!! Otherwise it grabs your attention

This was a fantastic read. I could barely get anything done in my life because I was so focused on reading the book. I loved Aeron. Such an adorable little kid, he was a little unrealistic as well as how everyone took to him, unless that was supposed to be his "princely energy" because he will one day be the next Alpha King, but if that was the intention the author really needed to either outright say that or allude to it. I think she did at one point but I can't be sure. I love the twins (who wouldn't?) And Julian. Is the next book going to be Julian's? I had difficulty telling what direction the author was intending him to go, I also had difficulty knowing who Caius preferred or if he liked both men and women. But it will be interesting to see where the author goes from here. Especially since Caius just being Caius made the flight attendant sigh everytime she walked by (unless it was irritation). And the twins are in Crescent for more than moral support... They're there for their stories (I hope).

Such a nice and entertaining story. The book was edited - as per writer's note in the book - and it's ok, I can see why she did it(but some of the old and new stuff mixes/overlaps; anyway, all in all you get the gist). Funny story and characters, you'll love some imediately and you'll hate others on spot :)). So far it's been a good read, waiting for updates. By the way, when new updates will be released ?

I’m hooked I don’t want the story to end!!!! I love Aeron, I wish Elara would just accept Thorne and be happy. I also want to see Cassia and Julian get together because I think they are a perfect match. I love Luna Lyanna and Alpha Darius…..I wish Seraphina was going with them to North Cresent, Elara seems stronger, more settled with her mom. In the end I hope Elara end up happy, and have more pups!

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I love how thorne didn't let them take away his fated mate and child land how he fought for them and with them. Just because he is the alpha king they thought that they could control and make him bend to what they wanted so he wouldn't start a war but you never mess with someone's child or someone they love more than they love themselves. Some people are just born to stupid and spoiled to understand what family and love truly mean

Absolutely loved this novel! Aeron's cookie tirades, the banter, the love story between Elara and Thorne. The steadiness and patience of Thorne, waiting for her to choose him and showing he is worthy of her trust. I loved how the quick witted banter between all the characters. This is a testament to a mother's love - the fierce protection of both her child and mate and the fierce protection by her family of her draws you in and keeps you there. Highly recommend!

Please tell me there's more to this novel.This can't be the end, no, no, no. I need more. It can't end yet.It's too good.I need more keep writing. Too many people are getting mates. It's just getting too a really good part.And you're gonna end it yet. I love they're becoming a family together, and I love the little Prince. He acts like a king right now making laws and rules for everyone. Please keep this book going.It can end this way it's giving too good.We need to find out what's going on with the shadow queen.