Fated and Knocked Up by the Alpha King Reviews

So sad the way the writer keeps telling the same thing what happens but with different people. It makes the storyline confusing and ruins what could have been a good story. I hope it is because it was the writers first story. If not too bad because the story is ruined by the way everything keeping repeating itself. To many coins for keeping us to read the same thing so many times. I sounds like the writer needed to fill in more word 😞

This book began good but floundered after they moved into the palace. The constant 'like a' statements, broken sentences which didn't help to explain the events that were being talked about; the story took a downward spiral that I wasn't expecting. They were some really good parts but I wish it was enough to recover the story line, I was holding out hope. I did love the relationship began Thorne and Elara and the little comedian they created. I loved Thorne's unrelenting desire to bring his mate and son home, also how he was ready to do any and everything to keep them safe.

Loved this but wanted more of a love story with them! But would read it again!!! Great story! The characters were rich and developed but I wanted more of a love story between Elara and Thorne… possibly to even see them mated and to see what became of her former lover. I hope there is definitely more to come for this book and author or maybe another book that gives us the ending of how the war went and the romance!!!! Such a great read!!! Otherwise it grabs your attention

This was a fantastic read. I could barely get anything done in my life because I was so focused on reading the book. I loved Aeron. Such an adorable little kid, he was a little unrealistic as well as how everyone took to him, unless that was supposed to be his "princely energy" because he will one day be the next Alpha King, but if that was the intention the author really needed to either outright say that or allude to it. I think she did at one point but I can't be sure. I love the twins (who wouldn't?) And Julian. Is the next book going to be Julian's? I had difficulty telling what direction the author was intending him to go, I also had difficulty knowing who Caius preferred or if he liked both men and women. But it will be interesting to see where the author goes from here. Especially since Caius just being Caius made the flight attendant sigh everytime she walked by (unless it was irritation). And the twins are in Crescent for more than moral support... They're there for their stories (I hope).

This books got a great story line. I just wish it stop repeating it self you pay for a chapter you don't want the same thing in other chapters. And can her family give them some breathing room to bond. Everybody's always going in to her room like why is that? They need to learn as a family starting out or mates becoming mates for real, the love they are supposed to have together. And I big on ne I love lots of loving it's only been in there once. Come on bring the sex!!!!!

This is a beautifully written piece of work. It begins in realism and trope, then ends in poetry and magic. The characters are genuine, believable. The relationships are complicated and relatable. The dialogue is exquisite. But then…doesn’t end? Is there another volume? I hope so. Don’t let the tired and semi-grammatical title throw you off: this is a serious work with serious complexity. There’s romance, but it’s the subplot. It’s even more about power, trust, and loyalty.

I love it. Love werewolfs and all the mystic. Lost count of how many books i have read in the genre. Love the story, just annoyed at Elara for being so hard to please. I mean, she thought about Thorne but when she saw him again, she was like, No no no! Right away even though he said he searched for her for three whole years. She should have just gone with him right away. Stayed in the room so Aeron wasn't threathened

Loving this novel. At first I was furious with the Female main character, for reasons I won’t lay out for spoiler purposes, but have enjoyed her character arc and what she is becoming. Such great detail on descriptions of the castles, of the exciting chases and fierce battles. The star and most beloved character, comic relief and heart of everyone though, is three feet of dark curls and a stuffed Dwagon that will melt your heart and have you crying with laughter. Can’t wait to read more of this story!

I like the Alpha Novel platform and the content that is available. This Novel had me intrigued as it started off with a unique story line where the original family accepts and welcomes back their family members who left the pack. This was appreciated as sometimes this doesn't happen. The story was very interesting introducing a mystery handsome man. I often wonder why the mate bond was not realized in the introduction of this story but if often mentioned later on. Aeron and his wildlife behavior has stolen my heart. However I do wish the storyline would be much faster and not drag out the inevitable.

Chapters too short, coins cost too much.Good story. I will look for more books by this author.54 or more chapters and it cost too much in comparison to kindle books. The cost of coins is too high just like some the other services.The chapters of the book hold be more along the lines of maybe 25-30, chapters like a normal novel.I’m not sure if Im keeping this service or canceling subscription. I hope this helps.