Claimed by the Damned Alpha King Reviews

He is so cruel to her but his ex is no better because she wants what she can't have, I know he wants her because he wouldn't try to protect her when she is in trouble with people because she can't do it herself. I know she couldn't do it in the other pack but I don't know why she couldn't keep up with the training even if she graduate in the top off her class, so what happened to it

It's a good story. It could use some editing for continuity and some repetitive phrasing. I like the 2 main characters and the perspective shifts. The whole bondage "gift" and the bully ex-gf wearing it was over-the-top unbelievable. And how many times does this girl need to feel her burning, yearning groin without accidentally discovering what is going on "down there" ? Lol Hopefully, there will be more with Avelina's wolf. There's got to be something special about her, right!?!?! In any case I'm engaged enough to keep going through!

Almost zero spelling /grammar errors. The story is well written mostly but drags out a bit too much. Some details are too repetitive which takes up reading time but it’s probably meant to make one remember the storyline. I need to know if or when the main female character has any powers or will she just be a weak ‘princess’? The narrative voice is wonderful though . Author knows where they are going with this and gracefully dragging me along because I want to know as well.

This novel is quite interesting with all that Lydia had been through in her previous lifestyle and to mated to Thorne was a hopeful way of her new escape, he felt nothing for her and never intended on loving was a twist to this novel that I liked to read but it got more interesting to keep reading, let's just hope this author writes a book 2 of this 1 of little Aria, I'd like to see if she is as magical as they say.

If you like slow burns... this one is for you. This has got to be the glacier of all slow burners! The main characters are in a forced proximity situation which can be both exhilarating and exhausting emotionally. There's a rhythm, an almost tidal push and pull feeling when it comes to the actions between the two. The heat and passion these characters have prevent me from putting this book down. I am looking forward to the next half of this book!

I love the book I'm reading I don't like having to pay for coins to finish the book or read the chapters but Im finishing the book. Or having to write at least eighty words for a review, but like I said I want to finish this book!!!! Maybe I will delete the app after this book, maybe I won't!! Who knows!! I don't have a lot of money to keep paying for more coins!!! The book is called Alpha Kings bride!

This story doesn’t start off sweet. Evangeline’s family hates her. They make her do all the housework & of course her sister doesn’t lift a finger. They sell her to the Alfa to be his bride. She heard he killed his 1st wife & he is very ruthless. 1st she is placed in the Luna suite but he quickly changes his mindset & tells her she is going to be a maid. Also she wants little to no contact with her. She tells him ok at least you’re honest about it. They do have contact & she feels a pull & tingles but being a virgin with a weak wolf she doesn’t understand the meaning. When she reaches the kitchen she is told she looks exactly like his dead 1st wife. Then she is accosted by Syra the king prior mistress. Evangeline is dent to Luna training & of course Syra is promptly beats her up breaking her ribs & smashing her face in. But keep reading the Lune continues to get herself in trouble while the Alfa very SLOWLY starts to see her more & begins to have feelings for her & her him! 🥰

I'm liking this book so far i hate that it leaves you hanging but it pulls you in so you don't want to put the book down. Even though she looks like his dead mate,doesn't mean that she is like her the alpha should just be straight with her and stop all the secrets and I think he would be free to love her like it supposed to be. She shouldn't be so scared of him she needs to let him know how she feels

There are some spelling and grammatical errors or simply poor use of language and words which spoil this simplly written story. Maybe it’s just poor editing? Otherwise it is reasonable, light reading for a work time break to give a mental distraction. It feels like I’ve read it before - possibly a repetitive plot scenario in this genre or story. I’ve read more complex story-lines with a lot worse editing on this platform. So I’ll continue until it’s finished.

Her innocent ideas are amusing so much that I look forward to seeing how she reacts when the wedding night finally comes. Will her attraction to her new husband take over and allow her to enjoy herself or will she become overwhelmed by the intensity of her mate? It will be interesting to see how she she evoles into a luna her can be proud of. When will her wolf finally make an appearance? Can't wait to see how it comes out