Captured by Dragons Reviews

Unfortunately, this story is not finished - I would not have started it if I had known that. But I have enjoyed the story so far. The characters are interesting and the plot is one that I haven't come across before. The spicy scenes are fun, although they seem a little unrealistic (or maybe that's just my limited experience ha ha). The writing is quite good - better than some on this app. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

This concept had so much promise, but the author squandered it. The characters spent most of the book watching TV and smelling shampoo. The characters explained their feelings and thoughts repeatedly, like a broken record. Many chapters were mostly re-hashes of the chapter before. To top it off, the spelling and grammar were pitiful. There were missing letters in words, extra letters in words, random apostrophes, autocorrect mistakes, wrong words, missing words, and entire paragraphs repeated a second time. I kept slogging through, hoping for something to happen, but the characters spend most of their time hiding in the bedroom for safety; talking about how they hope to make things better but doing nothing. When they finally leave the palace on tour, the book just... ends. Save yourself. Read something else.