Blind Female Warrior Reviews

The only way I could do that was if you had to do a lot more work and then you would be done by yourself so you would be fine and then I could just go home to you if I needed you and you could just come over here or I can just go home if I need you can just let us go home if we need you guys are you still going home or you want me too but you can

Ah…. It’s okay. It’s not a horrible read. If you’ve got nothing else to read and don’t mind the mistakes and inaccuracies at times it okay. Not the worst I’ve read. Was actually getting good but kind of seems like the author got sloppy with writing and forgetting things about the main character… like she’s blind most of the book and then for a sentence here and there all of a sudden she can see? … but yeah if you’ve can get over that… it’ll entertain you 🤷🏽‍♀️ I’m still here for now- better than searching for another novel at the moment.

I'm not understanding how she is blind but describing how someone looks at her or even how they are standing. Being able to hear how someone moves is understandable. I also have a feeling that her brother might still be alive some where. And how is a blind woman leaving a place and going off through the forest. This story would have made more sense if you had made her not completely blind. Maybe be able to see shapes or something.

I really enjoyed this novel. The story line was exciting and interesting. I found the characters to be charismatic and their relationships were unpredictable which was nice. The twists and turns of the story kept it interesting and hard to put down at times. I would suggest proofreading there were many instances of repeated lines and also a lot of mistyped words as well as the occasional incorrect words. I feel it affected the rating I gave. I hope the author does a sequel.

The story line itself is interesting. However, the author can not seem to remember their own characters. For example, the main character is BLIND. However, she is constantly SEEING!! She sees other character faces and thier facial expressions, she sees the blood when another character gets injured, she sees the tree line of the forest. It is very irritating when a BLIND CHARACTER CAN SEE ALL OF A SUDDEN. The author needs to PAY ATTENTION to their own characters.

I that Kailiah has been through a lot inher life. Her first mate, was supposed to be the love of her life. He wound up betraying her and killing her whole family. Then to be even more evil he blinded her causing her to never be able to see again. The moon goddess granted her another mate which is rare. Her first mate betraying her made her not be able to trust anyone including her new mate.

Really love this concept.. author did a great job of making characters feel real. You really feel for the main character she’s great and the drama is just right. You do feel for the main male character and his situation. You really want them to find away to each other and hope she gets her brother back. Very interesting story really brings you in an makes you want to keep reading. I look forward to when the next day hits so I can keep reading.

This was a good book from start to finish the beginning.Could have had a little more acknowledgement as to who was who and how things started with the relationship overall, I would recommend the book.But it does definitely need to be edited.There were lots of typo errors, repetitive paragraphs that need to be cleaned up.I would have liked to have seen the ending a little more exaggerated, with what the birth of the pup from the brother was along with what hers was as well.Look forward to a second book

Story line flows and creates a unique tale. Main character is multi faceted. Mate is not the focus, but is woven throughout the story. If you like strong female characters, the type that walk through hell, and come back stronger, this Tory is a good choice for you. Issue - this story, like many others, needs an editor. Too many typos and duplicate text in strange spots. Fortunately, readers who are used to this can mentally “fix it” as they read.

I love the story and the lead female 😍 I admire Kalilha. She has suffered a lot and lost so much. And yet, she has survived. She stands upright and fight. And no one had to tell her what she has to do! Who dares will get to experience her sharpe tongue! I also hope Kiran isn't dead. He isn't just her older brother, he is her rock. By now i have read till chapter 35. And i'm looking forward how things get on. 🤩