Alpha's Last Minute Bride Reviews

A very interesting and captivating storyline. Enjoyed it, but took a while to finish because of endless grammatical errors. The errors got worse with the progression of the story. To some extent there are parts towards the end where I literally had to guess what the writer wanted to say, as it was not apparent. So it was like writing in my own thoughts/conclusions about what was happening. SMH. Please, please, please writers, get your work edited before posting, PLEASE!!! Anyway thank you for your great effort.

. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . .. . . .. . . ..

And Jake Jake Jake work aka so sad Danna masks ensnared amend so m n. M m k k k k k k r. R r t. Y y h g r h k k ok oh r he f d j k g she. When Jen’s. Ends men’s jams man jams danish jams and Ms an sn and and and and and and and and and s and and and Ms and sis Ms sis she asks and asks and

Very different so many surprises, and so many ups and downs. I love the book it was amazing and I love every step of it. Had me on my feet the whole way through. Threw me off guard and I love love love every second of the story. So glad she got her happy ever after. Wished there was a little more to the ending and telling us how the mom stopped the dad from turning her into a vampire. Otherwise it was an awesome story straight to the point and didn't give me a headache.

I feel like there could be more added to this story. I’m sad that they technically both died. Although they had to refund each other at the end, I felt you could go further with it! I love the book and will reread it again! Maybe a sequel to this book. I want to know more about them, I don’t know something more family, wars, children. What ever happened to Aleena where did she go! I want more of Orpheus. Please consider a sequel 😍🥰

Wow this was an un expected ending and I don't know how I feel about the Mistry of all the secrets and everything unfolding in this novel.. in my opinion it was way to perfect in everything Falling into place and so unreal or too much of a fantasy on the relationships,all the love, hate, grudges, reconciliation and all was way to perfect and timed, it was almost a given that they'll forgive each other and that we should expect a happy ending. I enjoyed reading although it went on too fast and ended-up filling too many gaps in a short time, as if the author wanted to finish already. But one thing for sure the author is gifted and I wouldn't have came up with such a storyline. I liked his creativity and how the story was bought to live, especially considering that it's all about super natural powers and all. Thank you. Xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx

This book was amazing... I couldn't put it down for a second. I'm glad they ended up together. This is a love story that I could read over and over again. I love stories like these that end in true love. The only issue I had was the misspelled words.. and mispronouncing.. I had to read several times to comprehend what she was trying to say. But other than that it was amazing.. so depressing about her mother though.. that took me out

Wow! This book was a lot to process, but it was definitely worth it. So many things happening at once. It definitely keeps your attention once you get it. Honestly, I couldn't come up with everything before it happened. All the questions that I got were answered within the next chapter. I am so glad that the female lead was able to make a better future in a different timeline. I was wondering what the list was from the male lead but I would have never guessed it was that.

It’s a different plot that I really liked! Words, spelling, grammar are not your strong points and deter from the great story you have to tell! I’m hoping you get some help with those things in future because I really think you’ve got a unique style that I could read again, IF you use someone to edit! Without editing it caused me to get so distracted from the story that I had to go back pages to figure out what was intended, but I I think you’ve have the vision. I hope you can find a way to better express them so it’s not distracting to readers.

I have a lot of things to say about this novel but not all of them are positive. Firstly, the author has a lot of problems with the grammar and typos in the book. Secondly, it was frequently frustrating trying to figure out who they’re writing about when they mixed up the pronouns for each of the characters ( said he or him or his when it should’ve been she or her or hers, or vice-versa). Now on a more positive note, the story itself was good and had some interesting elements that helped hold my interest. I think that the author should continue to work on this story and clean it up a bit more than they did before they released it in such a manner as they did. Maybe it will help to make it easier to read and understand what they were trying to say.