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ALPHA'S DARK PAYMENT. HE REJECTED HER. HIS WOLF CHOSE HER. Reviews

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Cheyenne Barnhart

Review after the novel completion

Definitely a great read. It did get confusing at times, seems like you wrote a part and forgot what you wrote and then put it in again in a slightly changed form. Overall though I am still just typing nonsense because it needs 80 words minimum. I definitely plan to see if you have more books to. If you haven't wrote a sequel you most definitely should as well. Definitely tugged at the heart strings to, got emotional, the only other thing I would suggest if you didn't I don't think I saw one would be a trigger warning, just in the graphic parts that r ape.

September 30, 2026
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Smith 31

Review after the novel completion

Wow, just wow. It's a book that give you so much emotions, anger, sadness, hatred and sooo much more. It's beautifully written. It's intensive, but the good kind of intensive. The change in the characters in the timeline are good written too. You can see how they al change in this novel, in a good way. Elara showed kindness and she got good karma for it back. The book has a good ending with a good twist in it. 🥰

September 23, 2026
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Rana

Review after half of the novel

Very immersive. Really well written. I’m enjoying the novel so far. The story reveals at a good pace. I can’t put it down. One of the best novels I’ve read in a while. The characters are well built without repeating and you feel you are there with them. Some you like , some you just tolerate and some you loathe. You feel their joy, sadness and fear. The description of their features and personalities really makes you feel like you know them . The scenery and atmosphere is very good and helps you imagine their lives as the story unfolds. I highly recommend this novel to those that enjoy the werewolf genre.

September 8, 2026
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Vennessa Garner

Review after half of the novel

I honestly have no idea what's happening.. the chapters are out of order.. the same scene are written 3 times.. in the same chapter. Then the very bext chapter it will be like the previous chapter never happened. I wish AI would have written this book it would have been better than whatever the hell this is. Honestly If you can make it to the end of this book...you are a pretty resilient reader. Or you enjoy terrible books.

September 3, 2026
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Willow

Review after half of the novel

I really like the story so far..keep up the awesome work! I am not finished with the book yet but I am so cheering for our girl to get a happy ending! I have been yelling 'Kane wise up man!' lol. I hope that she puts his mistress in her place. A very unique twist her paying for the sins of her father! I really hope the end brings her the happiness she deserves! Looking forward to seeing where this takes her!

June 20, 2026
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Jennifer Hall

Review after the novel completion

I really liked this novel. I wish the MC wasn’t so wishy-washy with his main love interest. The FMC is really likable/loveable…I really hope she gets her happily after ever prince or Alpha…she deserves it. I had no idea that it ends before it’s actually over…kinda disappointing. There were many parts in the novel where I had no idea what was going happen next & definitely wasn’t predictable, I really like that. I’ll definitely be reading the next novel though….gotta see what happens! Great novel….I definitely recommend.

May 27, 2026
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Jae

Review after the novel completion

Kane going from a total brute and killing her dad to a totally different guy with Elara is awesome. I really want him to fully claim her though and just move forward. He made the mistake of punishing her for her father's mistakes. I hope Anika gets her karma asap in a brutal way and mira and Lizzy find mates that get them out of being maids! Loving the story so far. Disliking the edit issues and repeat sentences. Here goes.

April 18, 2026