Alpha Nicholas Reviews

I’m so engrossed in this story, I’ve not been able to put it down! I so want a happy ending! Love how Nicholas is becoming more attracted to Bonnie’s heart.Her and him so deserves love and happiness. There’s a twist coming from somewhere I’m sure. Why is Will so down? How did Rowan meet up with Lola? Why do they blame Bonnie for her mother’s death when she had already died before she was removed from the womb? So many unanswered questions!! I have to keep reading all night!

Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.

The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors

So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.

Well this book started off exciting and intriguing even though it had lots of grammar errors and spelling mistakes and I mean lots, it still was ok though it did lose it way and was a little all over the place and had one drama after another without any conclusion to the story and the book was very confusing characters names kept changing so you were left deciphering what was intended and the ending so rushed and story lines were unfinished. Disappointing.

Nice story. Lots of secret feelings and foreshadowing to keep the reader’s interest. It contains some redundancy and grammatical errors, but they don’t interfere with the story-telling. The main characters are likable, the bad guys are despicable, and the interactions between and among the characters are satisfying. The pacing is pretty good, but would be better without the aforementioned redundancies. I haven’t reached the ending yet, but look forward to a happily-ever-after conclusion where the loving couple are rewarded and the bad guys are suitably punished.

I very much enjoyed this storyline but once again you need human proof readers. There are so many grammatical and name errors that correcting them in my head gets somewhat annoying. Sometimes I had to reread portions of the story to figure out which character they were really referring to and once which character actually died. Someone needs to go through these stories with a RED PEN! The characters were likable and the story had a great plot line. I hope there's a sequel.

This novel had me hooked from the beginning. Excellent storyline and characters. The characters had depth and the writer made you care about them andcwhat happened to them. I wasn't sire how I felt about Tony and Rosie not finding their boys, but I realized that the ending was authentic. This was an amazing read and I'll miss the characters and world that Taylor created. I just hate all the typos, misspelled and misused words. I would love to read, correct and edit these books for a better reading experience! To the author, great work! 😍

So far I love the novel. The character development is great. The story had kept me on the edge of my seat waiting for what's next. My emotions have been drawn out all over the place. Hate and disgust at Bonnie's family. Sorrow then sympathy for Nicholas and what his family had been through. I love the bond Lily and Bonnie have and in glad their mates are not only from the dance pack, but brothers. I am a little sad at Lilys lack of presence in the story since Bonnie was found in the woods, but hopefully she'll reappear soon.

I Love how everything changed for Bonnie in blink of an eye. I thought Nick was a jerk at first but then he grew on me. I do wish the boys had been found, and wish that Robbie was able to be with his mate. I think that would have been a happy ending all around but then again I'm a sucker for happy endings. I would like to read a sequel if that's possible. I would also like a little more play by play in the bedroom. LOL.