Alpha Nicholas Reviews

I’m so engrossed in this story, I’ve not been able to put it down! I so want a happy ending! Love how Nicholas is becoming more attracted to Bonnie’s heart.Her and him so deserves love and happiness. There’s a twist coming from somewhere I’m sure. Why is Will so down? How did Rowan meet up with Lola? Why do they blame Bonnie for her mother’s death when she had already died before she was removed from the womb? So many unanswered questions!! I have to keep reading all night!

Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.

The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors

So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.

It started off really well and was keeping me hooked but then it kept bouncing from one couple to another without really finishing the couple story off, and then parts of it was dragging and for some reason you’d read one chapter and then go to the next chapter which is the exact chapter you’d just read but from a different character point of view. Unfortunately the book finishes without some couples having sorted their story out so you kind of left hanging about the rest of the story and having to make up your own ending, which is annoying after having read the story.

While this book has a good story and compelling character development, it unfortunately suffers from a noticeable lack of proper formatting, layout consistency, and thorough editing. As I read through the chapters, I frequently found myself correcting misspelled words and mentally re-phrasing sentences just to make them make sense grammatically. These constant disruptions broke the narrative flow and made it difficult to stay fully immersed in the world the author created.Additionally, the ending felt incredibly rushed and left several major plot points unresolved, which was disappointing after investing so much time into the build-up. With a rigorous proofreading pass and a more fleshed-out conclusion, this could easily be a standout novel, but the current execution feels like a missed opportunity.

I really liked this story. The author did a great job of building the characters so that they were relatable. I truly loved the strong relationships within the alpha family and how they were so unwaveringly loyal to each other. And, on that same note, I absolutely loved how the boys’ mates were just automatically accepted and instantly loved; they were family from the moment the mate bond was recognized and it just felt like an extension of their incredible family bonds. Family is everything!

One awesome story. I loved the way you made me laugh,cry,even swear sometimes. I hope you come up with a second story that tells us that Rosie and Tony find their boys. I would also like roby find Aria and they become a couple too. I would also love it if the occult is taking down once and for all. I loved the fact that you ended in a good place in the story. I really get upset with stories that leave me hanging. Thank you for this storyline.

I loved reading it but I still feel done it ended too soon I wanted to hear more about the brothers and their mates and for Robbie to finally be with his mates, Tony finding his kids hope there is a book and the ending of the cult finding whoever is behind the kidnapping hear how the elders and alpha king say about this whole mess, at least the writer should have wrote about what they found inside their phones and how Adrian is doing

Ich liebe die Story und die Entwicklung bis jetzt! Wenn ich könnte, würde ich non-stop weiterlesen.... aber das ist mit der vuelen Werbung echt mühsam und sehr zeitaufwendig. Wenn es zum Preis eines normalen Buches mögluch wäre würde ich vlt sogar darüber nachdenken, Geld zu investieren - aber diese Leseapps sind völlig überteuert (wofür weder der Autor noch die Geschichte etwas kann) Diese Story hat meinen Daunen nach oben und ich bin sehr neugierig, wie sich der Plot weiter entfaltet.