Alpha Nicholas Reviews
Claudia Harvey
Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.
August 28, 2025Andi
The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors
August 24, 2025Janet Brown
So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.
December 15, 2024Ms Monster
So far this book has been great! Suspenseful from the beginning. I’ve seen it on several apps but this one has been a better read. Longer chapters. I love the plot so far. Not too predictable and lots more interesting than I thought. I can’t wait to get past the plot hole I’m at now and see where the relationship goes for the main characters! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ 10/10 recommend this book! ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨great read!!!! Worth all the coins!
March 11, 2026SquishSquash
This book really sucked me in. I'm not a big reader of fated mates books, but I got hooked. The author definitely has a way of keeping you in the moment and feeling what the characters have been going through. I love that I can't see where this book will be going. It definitely has me reading more than I planned. Staying up all night, just to know what happens next! I can hardly wait to see how this story will end.
March 11, 2026Tracey Boyer
It was a great book. From start to finish, I would have liked to have seen the ending a little bit longer and to have the 2 little boys found and also what happened with Adrian? And mia, if they took over the pack, that was alpha, harold's the one there bonnie and lily came from it left a lot to be discovered with what happened with robbie.And his mate, and if they did finally get together or not, hopefully there would be a book too.That discusses this
March 8, 2026zz
I have mostly enjoyed reading this story. However, the editing is not quite up to scratch - it screams of artificial intelligence. The are so many errors throughout the book that would have probably been caught by this laziest of native speakers or even a slightly interested preteen. The host of errors really make the story a bit difficult to read at times or actually unintelligible in some places. The short chapters are extremely annoying. It’s possible that you are being paid, but i’m definitely not watching all of those ads. Finally, it was hilarious to see this same story show up as the featured story for a different app in one of the ads. Good luck and enjoy while it lasts.
March 6, 2026Toya
I really like this book. But **spoiler alert! I feel the ending was rushed and left me with more questions than answers. It's started as an abused mate that is running away from her evil family. This book has began multiple side stories that are open ended! My main question is what happened with alpha Harold daughter and his missing best friend. He was supposed to confront him but never did. Is there going to be sequels about them. What about Rosie and Tony's boys, will that be a sequel. Especially Robbie! Will him and aria get together? So many questions need answers! Waiting impatiently for sequels!
March 5, 2026Skandranna
Only preunlocking chapters. Haven't read yet 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪 🙃 😞 😐 😔 😕 😪
March 4, 2026Christy
The story was written well. It did leave a lot of room for the reader to become bored. Some of the steamy scenes were lacking or nonexistent. Some repetitive wording made story blah. Compared to other wolf novels this didn’t seem to follow script. Not enough character connection. Didn’t like the writer failed to give complete closure to sections, like Lily’s dad, the alpha of Bonnie’s original pack, or warrior Cole. I’m not sure if this story had a sequel
March 2, 2026