Alpha Nicholas Reviews

Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.

The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors

So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.

This has been a great story thus far after catching my attention on social medias and other apps I looked up the author on here and am glad to have found the entire novel. This story has had many turns that I have found to be extremely entertaining and can not wait to continue reading to find out more of the story. I also am looking forward to reading more from this author. Can not wait to hear more about Lottie also.

This is a wonderful story with thoroughly interesting characters. The character developments and storyline are incredible. The description of the scenes are incredibly detailed and make you feel like you are there. The twists and turns are interesting and each chapter leaves you on an amazing cliffhanger. I cannot wait to see how the book ends and hope the female lead gets the life she deserves. The only problem with the novel is the occasional grammar mistakes but thankfully they are autocorrected in the brain. In all a wonderful novel x x x

So far I am hooked by the two main characters stories. It’s going at a good pace and is keeping me excited and the anticipation of what is to come next keeps it thrilling and wanting me to read more. There are multiple spelling and grammatical errors that need to fixed which is a bit of let a down as it takes away from the story when you have to stop and make sense of a sentence correctly. Overall; I am really enjoying it.

It was a good novel easy to read and follow. Quite a few spelling mistakes. Don't see the necessity of using alot .. too much foul la nuage though. I think it could have gone deeper with the Robbie and Rosie situation but over all good read. Used alot of points to read it though so even if you cumulative your points they go fast as it is double than usual. The writing needs works but at the end of the day it's just to relax. Also theme of babies and women being kidnapped is of value these days with what is happening in the world and what we are hearing.

What an amazing read 😊 I loved the whole book from start to finish. Bonnie, Nicolaus, Lottie, the Brothers (Shane, Robbie and Will. Plus Mum, Dad (who could ask for better) and the extended family such as Tony and Rosie. I hope there's more to come from the author and it's the story of Tony and Rosie getting the kids back and Robbie getting his mate after she's 18. I also hope that it would touch on the cult and possibly Nick and Co shutting them all down never to be heard from again. Great read. Would happily read a second time 😊

Such a good book, this is the second time reading it and I cant put it down feel so sorry for the girl and it just makes me feel for her the alpha is so nice and I cant wait to actually see if the mother of his child gets what she deserves, it just goes to show it takes a real man to raise a child no matter what the age. Also I am happy this stage of the book that she is seeing the how things go.

I did enjoy the novel. It was dramatic...as well as romantic. I did hope that Rosie and Tony would find their boys, but this fif not happen. It also seemed that if Aria was five months shy of being 18, I looked forward to her recognizing hdr mate in Robbie. This did not happen. I guess more chapters or a sequel will cover this. It would also seem that Shane and Will would be expecting as well! I hope the author completes this book