Alpha Nicholas Reviews

I’m so engrossed in this story, I’ve not been able to put it down! I so want a happy ending! Love how Nicholas is becoming more attracted to Bonnie’s heart.Her and him so deserves love and happiness. There’s a twist coming from somewhere I’m sure. Why is Will so down? How did Rowan meet up with Lola? Why do they blame Bonnie for her mother’s death when she had already died before she was removed from the womb? So many unanswered questions!! I have to keep reading all night!

Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.

The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors

So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.

What a great book love the twists and turns it would be great to have another book to follow on from this to complete the Robbie and Tony situations and the conclusions on finishing the cult there seems to be alot of room to carry the story on in several directions and I'm hoping the author with delight us all with their great imagination and obvious love of writing maybe a look at the doctor to I have a feeling her story could be a great one xx

This story kept me interested the entire time. I really enjoyed it and was sad that it was over. Maybe a sequel? I can only hope. I've come across some novels in this genre that seem to duplicate other storylines. Not this one. It was refreshing to read. I'll probably add it to the short list of novels that I'll reread. Great job by the author in writing a great story. Two thumbs up.

I have enjoyed this story. Probably could have done with a better proof reader. But you can still understand what tgw writer is trying to say. Good story line with believable story line. Sometimes the story does a bit much of going over the same story line from different characters points of view, but it intertwines well. Characters are given a good build up. Story possible loses a bit of strength or details near the end but it is nice that there is an end and that you are not left waiting for the next portion of the story. This book is a good read.

Interesting story just long enough some language problems but finally quit noticing it so much. I had never read a werewolf book before and enjoyed it but still not sure how I completely feel about it. I’m not sure I have eighty words to say about this story but I am trying. Only twenty six to go. I am glad that there is no ads to distract from the reading of the book. I will read another one like this one.

This book is interesting so far. I mean I made it to chapter 41 and it seems really interesting. The only thing that I don’t like is the fact that there are a lot of typos and word errors that you have to decipher on your own in order to figure out what they’re actually trying to say, but the story of itself is interesting. I don’t know if I have anything else to say but so far so good…

Can’t say the editing is very well done, needs a lot of work! You should at least have an editor who knows how to spell and/or use the proper words. The story tends to be fragmented in such a way one loses the context of the story. A 28 year old Alpha would have already dealt with many of the issues being brought up in a way that is reasonable and workable, particularly if he is an Alpha of a pack!