Alpha Nicholas Reviews

I’m so engrossed in this story, I’ve not been able to put it down! I so want a happy ending! Love how Nicholas is becoming more attracted to Bonnie’s heart.Her and him so deserves love and happiness. There’s a twist coming from somewhere I’m sure. Why is Will so down? How did Rowan meet up with Lola? Why do they blame Bonnie for her mother’s death when she had already died before she was removed from the womb? So many unanswered questions!! I have to keep reading all night!

Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.

The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors

So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.

I’m enjoying this story very much!!! Both Bonnie and Nicholas have had their share of heartache and abuse, so each one of them has multiple reasons to be hesitant about accepting the mate bond. Bonnie especially has doubts because she has never had the benefit of a loving and supportive family the way that Nicholas did. Each one of them is finding it difficult to openly express their true feelings, but as their bond continues to grow stronger, they are learning that they can trust and depend on each other to provide the emotional strength they will need to face a future together.

I like this novel but it is too many curse word like every sentence. I don't like Cushing mostly an "F" WORD. TOO MUCH and to much money I'm paying for this novel I can buy a pocket book of $3.50 but this is not worth paying 9 or 14 dollar per episode.i have to scape some of the chapter because is too much for the cursing and swearing. I'm not used reading a novel with soo many "F" sorry but that how I fell but other than that is good

Enjoying this novel so far. I appreciate not having to wait too long to find out what the secrets are. The dialogue can be a little distracting with all the back and forth and him calling her baby and sweetheart constantly. He could talk to her in a less baby-ish way that comes off somewhat condescending. And the dialogue feels rushed. And some of the chapters have a lot of white space between dialogue that makes the chapter go too fast without much story covered. I do like that chapters include both perspectives. Overall good.

This novel touches people on so many different levels. It is refreshing to see good conquering evil and that it is possible to, especially in this wary society. Even media puts out so much negativity, that skepticism is increasing at an unwarranted rate. You present that there are ways to address, work through problems and challenges we are faced with and resolve them. The novel content flows very effectively and consistently so that the storyline keeps the reader engaged. Kudos!

This is a very good book. I really like the character development. And the over all plot so far. Why does every wolf story have someone getting abused ? I love the incorporation of the witches. Why are rogues working together ? I thought the preferred to be alone ? A whole pack of rogues and they have an alpha rogue?? I must’ve missed something. Maybe they are under Lola’s spell? Or the other witches spell. I’m just gonna go back and read.

Could do with being proof read to eliminate some of the spelling and grammar errors. Thats my only complaint though, thoroughly enjoyed reading for the few days it took me 🤩 I hope the story is continued into a part 2 and the babies are found and the cults eradicated completely. Had me on the edge of my seat and on the verge of tears a few times with the twists and turns for Bonnie and Lily and the others