Alpha Damon Reviews

Great! Just can't wait for continuing of story!!!! Will there be a second book? If there already is one. What's the title? I was pulled in from the beginning and with all the twists it is hard to see where the story line is going. Will it be Sienna dad that comes from the afterlife to restore piece? Or he vanquish the evil? 🤩 or will the 3 semi sisters be the catalyst needed? 🥰 🤔

Sometimes the text is difficult to read because of too many errors, wrong or missed words. Sometimes whole sentences really do not make sense for me. So it's challenging, especially for me beeing not a native speaker ;-) Maybe a little editing would help? But, you know, once you've started, you want to know how it is going on... And I keep wondering how old the male lead is, because most of the time his acting is annoying, just like a spoiled brat who does't know what he wants. I just hope, he grows up as the book progresses. Don't loose hope! 👍

I love this novel. It really pulls you in and makes you want to get justice for the main female character from start to finish. At the same time it's great to see her supported by the Alpha's parents completely. So many times I wanted and hoped someone would just smack the heck out of Damon and point out none of this would have happened if he didn't just want to see how it felt before ripping her heart apart and that she left so he could have exactly what he broke her heart for.

I like the story line though there sre many gramatical errors. I like the development of each individual character. Overall good hook and very smooth storyline just wish the chapter were free. I like how each of the individual characters are slowly unraveling though I do think Damon should had chosen his aquantencies better lysandra is annoying. Hopefully the truth of who our main character is comes to light soon. Thank you for all the amazing chapters. Can't wait to read more cant put it down.

So far I am really liking this story and the App. Sometimes I wish we could get more chapters especially when the story is getting really good! I do think Damon took it to the extreme, he was the one who rejected his fated mate yet went crazy looking for her! She did NOT ask to be found and even though he found her on the streets in premature labor I think he should have taken her to a human hospital! She already suffered enough, this was way too extra. Also, his lil Luna Lysandra! Yea she better not get off at all for what she has done and treated sienna

I have enjoyed the strength the mother is showing, and the perseverance for hers and her daughter’s future. I kinda feel some way that anyone would give her and shit for leaving with her daughter… she was doing the same thing a lot of single parents due…which is survive anyway you can… things get better over time. She was just getting started. The arrogance of this Alpha is crazy, and letting anyone be smug or rude to her is beyond me.

Love the novel but the spelling errors are the only complaint I have. But the story plot I love. Sienna is my girl and I want to love Damon too but his wish wash feelings are killing me but he and I both know deep down he wants his girl back. The other had a way of pulling you in with proofreading it’ll be better than ever. I truly believe that. Again I love the story line and can’t wait to finish with a happy ending hopefully 🤞

The stories are intriguing and very interesting especially the werewolf stories they pull you in their lives and you feel like you’re part of the family. The story I’m reading now is alpha Damon the characters are all multi faceted and you can feel their emotions in the dialogue it’s great seeing Sienna developing into a strong character taking charge of her life. Damon is starting to realize that brute strength is not the answer to get the girl and his baby

So far i am enjoying this story. I did find the separation portion a bit short. There are also a bunch of typos but overall I am enjoying the journey that sienna and Damon are taking me on . The protagonist in the story are very annoying . I really hop that the baby doesn't get dragged into his mess. We can only keep reading to find out how this story will play out. See you guys at the end.

The writing could have been a little bit better but the storyline is very interesting. I do appreciate that the story does not drag out too much, but the writer gets to the point. I also feel that 80 words in the comments section is a bit much, but getting free points to continue reading the story for the free points is worth it. Which system sucks a little bit. Hopefully I can find another store that keeps my interest.