Abandoned Luna: Now Untouchable Reviews

I am genuinely enjoying this book the FMC is a strong woman who knows her worth and is willing to go after what she deserves. There is a perfect amount of drama and juicy details that keep you guessing and wanting more. I find myself super eager to read the next chapter. Can’t wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds and how deep the love between Cecilia and Sebastian will be (if it goes that direction)

That’s a very awkward place to end. Where is the rest of the story. There are some repeated words and paragraphs throughout that need correction. Also some of the wording is not phrased appropriately. There are also some him/her mix ups within the story that made things confusing. Overall the story line is good. Cecelia having cici slap herself and then slapping her didn’t fit with Cecelia’s personality within the rest of the book. I hope to see the rest of the story

So far I love the story line as she fights all the obstacles and finds her strength. Also finding a man to stand with her not against her. Trouble has a way of finding her but she has a way of fighting back and finding her justice/revenge. I hope the story is continually growing and she finds her happily ever after once the dirt settles and her past is left where it should sleep. Thank you

Great story so far. Lots of twists that keep You in suspense. Onde think is confusiones this, the Main carácter durará por su a human amongst werewolves, but i'm a other chapter mentió s her wolf...? I think the author got confused. Otherwise, great story line. Not too sappy and we'll written. I can't stand reading through the stories when there's so many grammatical errors and you have to figure out what they're trying to say. This has none of that.

I’m really enjoying the book. I just wish that Cecilia could have developed a back bone sooner to leave her sorry ass husband Alpha Xavier. I also want Sebastian to hurry up and make his intentions known, what is with the intense moods and looks he keeps giving her anyway? Amara too is complex and I’m trying to understand her dynamics with Alpha Sebastian, did they actually date before or are they just being forced together and Amara fell in love?

Was great story im glad she find someone who help her after she being betrayed and what to give everything come to his rescue and have a best friend that will pick you up when your down will good to bat for you and can count on on are call when every you need them and they will come running glad she was able to stand up for herself and not let ex walk all over her and stay with a cheater

So far I like this book, at first it said that she was human and now she is a wolf it is still a good book. I do like this app. It is different from other books and so worth it. The Novel is good it doesn’t go from her being so poor to being the best and needed wolf. I want the story line to move faster for her to hook up with her true mate. I am in patient though

I feel like Xavier does love Cecelia but because she isn't a werewolf someone is pushing him to mate with a werewolf so that he can so much power and that's the only thing that broke them off and Sebastian does love her but I don't get why he is holding back because he will hold back and someone or even Xavier takes her away and he will regret it later. And Cecelia doesn't really know what she wants she's just all over the place.

I want to say that it's a story worth investing in, but I can't and be satisfied in leaving this review with that final answer. Not fully, anyway. The plot is brilliant. There's so many twists and turns, ups and downs, that you simply cannot put the book down, You have to know what's coming next. You'll come across chapters that are long, well written & suspenseful, the kind that has you on the edge of your seat, leaving you either satisfied, horrified or intrigued. Then you have many that are dragged out by being overly repetitive in consecutive chapters, that it becomes so frustrating you've half a mind to throw in the towel, but you're deeply invested both in the storyline, its characters and financially, to quit is out of the question by this point.. You're also going to come across many short chapters you feel have been rushed, either the author has run out of steam, motivation, inspiration & just filing space - all the while, you've read 3/4's of the way, you're upto chapter 100+ and you've been keeping an eye out for any new chapter updates. . There hasn't been any, and you're losing hope fast that there will be, by the time you've caught up to ch:175.. If it was a finished novel or at least a frequently/consistently updated one, my review would be full of praise, because I think this book, combined with the authors time, talent & effort, wholeheartedly deserves it. And Maybe it still does? But for me, at this particular moment, Im a little disappointed, disgruntled, dissatisfied.. Alot of my own personal time, emotions & money has been wasted in supporting something that ultimately seems likely to remain unfinished..xx

The storyline is fairly good, or at least it was at the beginning. As the book has progressed, the story has become increasingly silly in parts. There are also multiple inconsistencies throughout the book, some bigger than others (she’s a human, then a she-wolf, then back to human), some in consecutive sentences. Grammar is all over the place to the point it seems like it was written by two different people, some parts well written, some with rambling, almost incoherent dialogue. Overall, it’s an ok read, and I’ll probably stick with it a while longer; I wouldn’t necessarily recommend it though.