Abandoned Luna: Now Untouchable Reviews

I am genuinely enjoying this book the FMC is a strong woman who knows her worth and is willing to go after what she deserves. There is a perfect amount of drama and juicy details that keep you guessing and wanting more. I find myself super eager to read the next chapter. Can’t wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds and how deep the love between Cecilia and Sebastian will be (if it goes that direction)

That’s a very awkward place to end. Where is the rest of the story. There are some repeated words and paragraphs throughout that need correction. Also some of the wording is not phrased appropriately. There are also some him/her mix ups within the story that made things confusing. Overall the story line is good. Cecelia having cici slap herself and then slapping her didn’t fit with Cecelia’s personality within the rest of the book. I hope to see the rest of the story

It’s a great page turner! The selected locale could’ve been researched more in depth, or set in a fictional place to avoid any jarring disparities with reality that take you out of the story, but overall it’s very good! The twists are frequent enough to keep the plot moving but not so frequent or dramatic that it tires you out, and forces you to take a break for your own sanity. I read 100 chapters in one sitting.

Favourite read to date, super enjoyable. The humour, turn of phrases and descriptions made me laugh out loud. Loved the writing of it all. It struck a great balance. Keen to read more. Favourite read to date, super enjoyable. The humour, turn of phrases and descriptions made me laugh out loud. Loved the writing of it all. It struck a great balance. Keen to read more. Favourite read to date, super enjoyable. The humour, turn of phrases and descriptions made me laugh out loud. Loved the writing of it all. It struck a great balance. Keen to read more.

Im really enjoying this book. I really like the Luna and her courage. She is a very complicated character, who has been through a lot. I admire her spirit and resilience. I hope the ML can step up and really see her for who she truly is. The scenery is also great. Im enjoying the pace of the romance as well. The characters are unfolding at a great pace. I look forward to seeing this to completion.

I enjoyed the read and the fact the writer threw some twists in. Will Cecilia ever realize Sebastian is her mate? Will Cecilia end up pregnant and will she give her heart to her mate? Her parents have to come clean about Cecilia's childhood and what happened why they protected her from her past. I look forward to reading the next book to see what happens. Hopefully we jump back to Cecilia's past before the future.. Please don't leave any details out!!

I thought this book was a bit of a slow burner, however, once the story gets going it's one that is fantastic. I absolutely loved it and was in hysterics crying with laughter on several occasions. Cecelia reminded me of the character Bridget Jones. I would normally be overly critical of a book that is based on werewolves, but in 175 chapters only 2 of the characters wolves were written about and not a single person shifted. Yes this did seem odd to me but because the storyline was so brilliantly written the lack of other information wasn't necessary. This author is extremely talented and I hope there's a sequel to this book. I highly recommend it.

Nooooooo no no no no nooooooo this is not fair! Why? Why?! WHY???!!?!?? Why is it not a complete book *sob* i am so invested in how these people will deal with comes next. When will the new chapter arrive? I am not one to wait for new chapters or seasons. I just like to binge will my eyes water. Sleepless nights and missed meals. Just to see what happens next. I hope I do not have to wait long.

This book really keeps you interested in what will happen next, especially the mare triangle between Sebastian and Xavier. I can’t wait to see how it plays out. I’m team Sebastian! And the mustard’s to the story so it’s not just about the romance is really nice. Often you don’t see that in these book. But let’s be honest…we’re here for the romance. It’s definitely a slow burn but hopefully there will be some spice soon.

I'm very happy with how this book is written. The female protagonist is not a pushover, which is a breath of fresh air for this genre. She's strong and intelligent. My favourite thing about Ceciilia is her preservation instinct. Even though she does need to be rescued here and there, she doesn't sit and wait for help to come. When faced with a situation where she needs to be her own hero, she does what she needs to do. She's amazing!