Abandoned Luna: Now Untouchable Reviews

I am genuinely enjoying this book the FMC is a strong woman who knows her worth and is willing to go after what she deserves. There is a perfect amount of drama and juicy details that keep you guessing and wanting more. I find myself super eager to read the next chapter. Can’t wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds and how deep the love between Cecilia and Sebastian will be (if it goes that direction)

That’s a very awkward place to end. Where is the rest of the story. There are some repeated words and paragraphs throughout that need correction. Also some of the wording is not phrased appropriately. There are also some him/her mix ups within the story that made things confusing. Overall the story line is good. Cecelia having cici slap herself and then slapping her didn’t fit with Cecelia’s personality within the rest of the book. I hope to see the rest of the story

Truly speaking I felt like this book is dragging everything out, this could has been 100 chapters only and it is quite frustrating the way Cecilia is reacting to Sebastian and his affection. She is in denial too much and it gets to a point where it’s frustrating but hopefully the next one is more clear with a good sense of direction and hopefully it leads us to the end that should make sense. Really looking forward to it now. Thanks.

I really love this book. There's so many twist and turns and I love the female role. She's so strong and beautiful. Its everything you would want to be. The backstabbing and the revenge. Then the out of no wear romance it's shocking. Xavier is such a dumbass and a douchebag. He deserves everything that is coming to him. I hope she doesn't get back together with him. I'm glad she has a good friend to rely on. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I’m enjoying the unique storyline. It doesn’t follow the normal trajectory of stories where the second chance mate is super willing and uncomplicated. Theres an extra air of reality here. Life is never uncomplicated. Feelings are messy, werewolf or not. The sex scenes are a bit aggressive, then again…werewolves. There are a few continuity errors. One moment someone is dressed, the next they are referred to as shirtless. Or the main female is a human but occasionally her inner wolf is mentioned.

So far it is interesting and well written I don't like the cost of the book and will probably move to read it on Amazon but at this point it seems to be a solid story. Good body and story line. I don't like that the reviews have to be so very long. I can say what I feel in a lot less than 80 words and I don't think people need long explanations to know if they want to read it.

I really love stories where the female protagonist is able to safely exit a potentially dangerous situation and go onto thrive. Our protagonist Cecilia is a strong character with a good head on her shoulders. If I had some complaints, however, it would be that Cecilia‘s name is too similar to the affair partners. Also, the author seems to be struggling to keep some details straight, like whether or not the protagonist is human or has a wolf. nonetheless, it is enjoyable.

The reading and story progression is well passed through. I really like the main character as she is not the classic damsel in distress or the all mighty that doesn’t need help. She shows her struggle and fights back with her own power. The male characters such as Xavier and Sebastian are made pretty different and show a really good example of what they were created for. Sebastian present in her time of need but letting her choose him and Xavier messing up unaware of how deep he is creating a distance in his relationship with Cecilia.

Oh my did you have to cut it off here. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this novel. Please tell me there is a continuation here otherwise I would be very sad😢.l am curious to find out what happens next. Will Cecilia parents tell her the truth. Secretly hoping for Sebastian and Cecelia to finally make it official, get married and have their little pup. How can l forget Harper curious to see what is going on with her and Tang. Please continue on and don't leave me hanging😔

Story is good so far and moves along quickly so you don't spend ages having to read too many background details before the actual story plot starts. It will be interesting to see how the dynamics play out between the characters, and how their relationships evolve throughout the story as they are already tangled together. I just hope that it's worth waiting to be able to unlock the chapters, as it takes a lot of points for each one.