The Omega’s Second Chance Mate Reviews

So far the story is compelling, well paced and will keep you on your toes. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing so glaring that it detracts from the reading pace or from enjoying the developing story line. There are some confusion about the familial position of the leading characters, are they first borns or second but that is clarified as the story unfolds. The author has to do some editing to ensure character continuity and a few grammar mistakes but overall, very enjoyable and looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds

The story keeps you engaged; well drawn characters. Some grammatical errors, but not too distracting. A good editor could make this suitable for actual publishing. It is annoying to have to subscribe or watch endless ads. If it were a real book you would pay much less than what I probably will end up paying on this app. And now I have to leave a review of at least eighty words! It never ceases to amaze me how incredibly stupid I can be!

Amazing book so far! So many good characters with great personalities. No a fan of the half sister or the step mother though both are evil to the core, I just hope they get their just desserts with a good whopping. May the moon goddess plague them tenfold. Got to admit I’ve read many Werewolf books and this one is very catching and holds you on the edge of your seat with every chapter. I can’t wait to read the whole book

So far, I’m enjoying it! A few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, but overall, it’s good. I’m curious how long Garrett will take to reveal his true self to Lily, I’m curious what dastardly things Brandy is plotting and how they’ll backfire on her, and I can’t wait to learn more about Lily’s background. I have a feeling there’s a lot she doesn’t know about herself yet. I can’t wait to finish the book!

This is a great story. It starts off keeping you engaged and wanting to read more. I don’t want to put it down. The characters are a good mix of good and bad. It has a love story that you want to succeed. The story isn’t too spicy but just enough for reader to use imagination. I can’t wait to see what comes next for the characters and where the story ends up. Definitely recommend this fantasy story.

Absolutely positively in love with this book so far it’s highly recommended and addictive it’s good really really good I do wish that the chapters were longer but it can be overlooked I’m in love with Garret and honestly I would like to kick Matthew in the nuts for being so stupid and Lilys family too! I’m nowhere near half way and it’s getting better and better with each chapter I just wish they would explain why he wears a burned mask

I really love this app!! I can read at my own pace and they have a ton of what I like. Sometime you will come across a book that takes forever to update but if it’s really good you won’t mind the wait. I would definitely recommend this app. I also like the rewards you can get for the more reading you do. I try to watch videos instead of using my coins when available this way I can maybe finish a book early

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This novel is so great!! Not a boring spot! The story development is really well done - and character development is precise and very full!! Love the story of the 2 main characters - Lily and Garrett! So good - can’t wait to read more! Author is an excellent writer! I can already tell I will be very sad to finish this one! But I can slow down - loving it way too much! Highly recommend this book to anyone that wants a great read!

Love this story so far I can't stop listening to this story the characters are so good and exciting I can't wait to see has this story keeps going I hope Lily and graner end up together and Brandy get what she deserves she is a real bitch I can't believe how evil a bitch she is and her mother deserves to be put in her place also I want to listen to this story all day long w