The Heiress' Revenge Reviews

I like the story line. The characters are interesting. The story is a little slow moving and I do believe that it will take a long while to resolve some of the conflicts in the story. I believe that chapter lengths are fair for the coin cost. There are several missing words and I had to infer what the author meant. I do believe if we are paying for a story, someone needs to proofread it. So far, good novel.

Love the novel so far,very captivating.One cannot wait for what is to come next and when she will find out who he is to her.The father is just a big bully and the friend needs a reality check.The leading lady portrays her part well as you as a reader feel what she is feeling,you go through all the emotions with her.Cannot wait for when she finds out she had been with tje right person all along even though she thought ot was a business transaction,vert captivating indeed