The Heiress and the Four Brothers Reviews

Please edit this story. Every chapter has at least one incorrect pronoun usage i.e. he instead of she, her instead of his. Every time it happens, it pulls you out of the story. Also the chapters are quite short for the coin price being charged, that needs to be reviewed as there are plenty more stories on this app that offer more content for the same price. This story is definitely a "slow burn" but if things don't amp up soon, I'll have to change that to just plain slow. And if you want sizzle and spice then from what we have received from the 1 sex scene so far, this might not be the story for you - very tame and pedestrian.