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Leleh Mopalami

Review after half of the novel

Im giving this book a fair chance but cannot help but feel like it's rushed in some parts, insincere and unrealistic in some and the chapters are incredibly short, literally 3minutes per chapter, bit of a bummer considering the coins spent, otherwise I'm gonna continue reading and just hope it's not disappointing, hoping the chapters eventually get longer and the plot shifts to a better one, I legit feel like 4 chapters should be 1, what's the use for a lot of short chapters really?

May 14, 2024
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Boi

Review after the novel completion

The twist and turns mmh.πŸ˜πŸ€”. I started this book in the morning and couldn't put it down 🀣. Very very nicely written thank you author 😁. Wish they could have trusted their instincts about each other a lot of the misunderstandings that happened would have been avoided. Her father was a very bad human and I doubt he loved his first mate because how do you treat kids born from a relationship you say you valued the way he did. But anyway it made a stronger and she was able to survive all that was thrown her way. I hope her kids will be strong like her. Hoping for a second part πŸ˜‰.

May 11, 2024
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Seamangg

Review after the novel completion

I thought it was well done, I would have liked to have found some redemption and salvaging of the relationship between Dylan and Thomas because they were supposed to be like brothers. I thought it could have been a little better explained on how the rogues kept managing to get into the Paxton pack without being seen or stopped. However all and all I did like the story and the characters seemed to be developed very well and the ending was good also, I don’t read stories that have bad endings.

May 7, 2024
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Tasha

Review after the novel completion

I really enjoyed this story. Mai come into her own near the end. She got the thing she deserved a happy family. I do feel bad for Dylan but Cora really came through in being a better person in the end by saving her mate. Hopefully he gets to find someone to help heal him now. Thomas is such a great alpha and mate for Mai, he loved her enough to let her go if he had too. So glad that didn't happen.

May 7, 2024
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Megan

Review after the novel completion

It’s was honestly a pretty good book. Lots of twists and turns. I stayed mad at the main character the first half of the book but it got much better. If you have an issue with women being beat or other things happening to them then you may want to skip this book. Or at least take the warning seriously. I loved how independent the characters were but sometimes it was a little juvenile in my opinion. The beta in this story is unlike any I have read about in any other werewolf books.

May 6, 2024
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Maryann

Review after the novel completion

Good story but it leaves you hanging where Dylan is concerned. Better grammar than I have seen written. There are some sentences that had structure issues and misspelled words. Had some issues with he and she in certain places. But overall the characters had you coming back for more. It was sad that they killed Cora off after the sisters started to become friends. It would have been nice if there had been retribution for the mistreatment of Mia from her pack.

April 30, 2024
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Pixiedust

Review after the novel completion

A very well written novel, emotion drama and love all in one. The characters are mostly relatable and you can clearly feel a connection to them. You would love the drama and the developments on the novel, it is just right, not too heavy, not too much. The lead characters are strong ones. Both female and male and that's refreshing and fun to read. It's told we'll, you can keep track on the goings and overall I would highly recommend reading it. A sweet love story, a wonderful couple fighting their way to be together through real fights and emotional turmoil. A wonderful read!

April 29, 2024
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Emma Abbekerk

Review after the novel completion

I would highly recommend reading this book to all my friends and family I really really enjoyed it. It was nice and short and straight to the point but they could have dragged it out abit. they never said when or if Thoma's first beta came back or not from going rouge they really could have dragged out the story abit more but from beginning to end I loved it and wanted more. I hope I get to read more short story's from this writer soon.

April 28, 2024
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Andrea Rajkumar Barnes

Review after half of the novel

Interesting and the build up is great. The need to keep the story going is what's bringing me right back. Although the fillers can be frustrating but I guess that's what keeps the story going. I like the app too that it allows you to collect coins to read the story or watch ads which is the best part. Its the unique part about the app which is rare to find. I'm in love with the app cause I love to read.

April 26, 2024
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Bre L

Review after half of the novel

This novel is so great. There are so many twists and turns it just leaves you wanting more! Everything about this novel is amazing. I would definitely recommend this book if you live a twist of events and the mystery of everything. You also get different povs! All in all I think you will really enjoy this book if you give it a chance. Just dive into the world the provide you! I promise you will enjoy this book like I've had!

April 26, 2024
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