Ten mountain men for Christmas Reviews

Het verhaal ten mountain men for christmas heeft een hele andere wending dan ik had verwacht. Dit is misschien ook wel de strekking van het verhaal. Het blijft wel een erg interessant verhaal waar ik erg graag op door lees. Voor een bonus moet ik hier iets over het verhaal schrijven van ten minste 80 woorden. Het blijkt dat dat best veel is nu ik aan het typen ben. Nog maar een paar woorden en dan zijn het er eindelijk genoeg.

This story is confusing as its premise promises lots of steam and even smut but gets bogged down with overblown navel gazing. It feels like the author chose the title first without plotting out how the dynamics between this many protagonist would actually work. Many of these early chapters are repetitive, back-tracking over thoughts and interactions, and some even seem like they were written as revisions or replacements for the previous chapter. To me, it feels like the author wanted to write a reverse harem story but hasn't tested the waters with a 2 on 1 dynamic and instead just jumped straight into this preposterous 10 on 1, something even the most experienced polyamory author would struggle with.

This book is sweet and heartwarming. It is a reverse harem story. It’s not a story that all the men jump her at once they take it one step at a time. Individual all the men are all different. Scared of feeling and being hurt. All ten are brothers with the same father different mothers except for the twins. They all have different careers. I am hoping the story ends good. Once Christmas is over they will walk away. Hopefully they won’t. It’s a very good book.

At first, it was a very good book, but I definitely expected more spice. I guess it really was a message of one finding their self and building confidence in which the main character did along with the other others. I guess I just wanted more of being that I’ve read books more spicier with less of a title. The setting was pretty awesome and all the men were definitely hot in their own way as I said again, I just wish there was more.

Loving this story. Looking forward to more chapters before too long. I like then strength of the female character and how she is seeing herself, and the ten brothers. The way she is getting them to see themselves and others. The way everyone is included in the activities, and observations made when some are seen to be stepping back for whatever reason. One thing I am disappointed with is that the chapters seem to be getting shorter and detail is missing, almost presumed. Make the chapters a few pages longer, and include more details. That is what makes this story rather engaging.