Sold To The Mafia For A Million Dollars Reviews

AWFUL! so many name mistakes throughout the book, grammar and spelling mistakes too! The story line itself was good but it drags on ALOT. The author has mixed two story lines together which was pointless. If I hadn’t already paid and unlocked all the chapters thinking it would be worth it, I wouldn’t of finished it. Skipped the last 7/8 chapters because I couldn’t be bothered to keep reading the same chapters over and over ( yes you unlock chapters but there’s multiple of the same ones!!!)

Loved the novel but was disappointed by the abrupt ending. All the suspenxe kept me engaged, but I was expecting more about her life as a wife of the head mafia. However treated their children stuff like that. The story line was great and love how Xander and Chase's stories interlinked. Overall a good book l, just wish it had a different ending. Does she become involved in the mafia business, or does she let him do it on her own. Do Chase and Lisa stay together afterhe is out of the hosanna less paranoid.

It was good and the mix of stoeies at the end really good to. Kind wish there was more of the Chase & Lisa story also the book really needs a huge proofing on the misplaced names, words, puctuation, gramma and duplicated story parts. There was a whole chapter put in twice but, you had to jump past the first one because the story wasn't to that point yet. It was around chapter 53 during the Chase & Lisa story.

It's interesting to read and keeps me on my toes. The way the brothers are different is great. They have their own personalities. The way the wife takes control in several areas of the book and how she handled it when her husband was shot and she found out she was pregnant. The girl who wound up in the other brothers bedroom and was freaking out reminds me of myself. The mom who loves her children no matter what they do for a living.

I was really disappointed in this novel. It started well but the writing let it down. At times it was difficult to follow as it changed whose POV, sometimes mid sentence. Random words were used and you had to guess what it shoukd have been. So it was confusing and irritating at the sane time. Surely someone? Anyone? Could have read it and proof read it? Then the story was all wrapped up neatly and happily ever after in a couple of short chapters......

It is a great and exciting story, showing more positivity, like love and human relationships, than negativity like violence associated with the stereotypical idea of Mafia. I like that it shows the human side of those we often see portrayed as monsters. BUT the translation to English is somewhat poor, with many words that clearly don't fit. Fortunately most of the misused words are easy enough to decipher what it should be, but it is somewhat annoying.

A beautiful love story, but the only problem with the book is that It has a lot of typos. Ashley's story really moves me. Illtreated by people who are meant to love her and loved by dangerous strangers. I wish I had parents could have been able to see how her life turned out. Just to rub it in their faces. Lisa on the other hand, wanted to be loved so much that she was ready to take all the crap men were throwing at her. I don't think the book did enough to redeem her character

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I wish it would have told what happened after the birth and if there family grew . Just not love enough what happened to his sister and brother and did his business grow . Also what happened to tge model ex girlfriend what happened to Ashley best friend. Did she learn to ba a proper mafia wife and did baby brother join the family business including the mafia. But all in all this was a good book just need to be longer

This story was written well but it didn’t have many grammatical errors throughout the story but it is still and enjoyable read. I think that the story if very faced paced considering it is two stories in one book with about thirty chapters each. I also got the names a bit confused and I feel the second story was introduced to weirdly. We are introduced to new characters we have no clue about I feel we could have go introduced to them in the fist story maybe Chase opens up when talking with Ashley or his sister, but overall a good story!