Sold To The Mafia For A Million Dollars Reviews

AWFUL! so many name mistakes throughout the book, grammar and spelling mistakes too! The story line itself was good but it drags on ALOT. The author has mixed two story lines together which was pointless. If I hadn’t already paid and unlocked all the chapters thinking it would be worth it, I wouldn’t of finished it. Skipped the last 7/8 chapters because I couldn’t be bothered to keep reading the same chapters over and over ( yes you unlock chapters but there’s multiple of the same ones!!!)

Loved the novel but was disappointed by the abrupt ending. All the suspenxe kept me engaged, but I was expecting more about her life as a wife of the head mafia. However treated their children stuff like that. The story line was great and love how Xander and Chase's stories interlinked. Overall a good book l, just wish it had a different ending. Does she become involved in the mafia business, or does she let him do it on her own. Do Chase and Lisa stay together afterhe is out of the hosanna less paranoid.

So far I am really enjoying this novel. It is turning out to be very interesting. I like the story of Xander and Danielle, and now I can not wait to see what happens between Chase and Lisa. I really hope that something good happens for both couples. Xander and Danielle deserve happiness and I really hope that they find it. I hope Xander opens his eyes and realizes that Danielle is really perfect for him. I also hope that things work out for Chase and Lisa, they deserve happiness also.

I like the storyline. It’s different from several other mafia stories that I’ve read already. Buying his wife instead of an arranged marriage is a nice twist. I’m having a hard time with all the grammar errors. Also all the spelling issues. The peoples names a mixed up frequently. Writer wrote there were some issues going on in his life and he’d fix the issues as soon as he could. I guess he forgot because they are all over in the chapters.

this book is amazing. Each chapter is just spell biting good you never know what’s gonna happen and somebody something completely changes it. You’re just blown away with where the characters are going and how their interacting with the other characters. It’s just amazing very well done very well written I can’t wait to find out what’s gonna happen next I can’t seem to put it down. This book is one of my favorites so far.

I think this is the worst novel I've ever read. Messy story, bad language, no clear perspective at all. Sometimes I thought the author was drunk. Sometimes a person was calld Chase and in the next chapter he was called Ian. In one chapter a killer is dead, in the next chapter he is alive. I was confused most of the time. I'm glad I didn't pay a single dime for it. The author should consider doing something else, anything that doesn't include writing.

I have some mixed emotions with this part, I really was enjoying the storyline of Ashley and Xander and now I feel like I am reading a whole different book about 2 other people. I think I am just gonna skip ahead a few chapters and get back to the main reason I decided to read this book. Also I liked the warning about going into the explanation of Chase getting shot but I feel like it could of been summed up into a 2 chapters and not being carried on.

Translation terrible, grammar mistakes terrible, name changing in the middle of conversation of two people. What a hell ? ? ? ? ? ? This is the worst story ever I read. When translating from other language maybe use proof reader. to check . . . . . . . . sad sad. sad . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Maybe it's not your thing be ab author.

This novel was difficult to read. Obviously it was written in another language and was translated to English. There were many errors during the translation. I lost interest with the book trying to make sense of the story line. I would have rated this better if it was fluidly written but pronouns were incorrect along with many words describing the characters were wrong. Having two stories intertwined within the novel doesn’t help. At many times the story repeats itself

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