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Oggie Poggie

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Really liked your story line and the characters. I just wished that you would have used the spell check while you were writing. Also you mixed some of the American words with the UK terms, which made it difficult to follow a few times. Liked your story line, just use spell check and look up terms per country. Oh and maybe not repeat sentences so much, I know it’s hard because you are trying to get as much on the page as possible.

November 28, 2024
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megan morrow

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I think you should have put more into the ending other than that it was soooooo goood.. Like what hhappens after they get married?dnd x cjdjnc cdbd fbfbf ff f fnfnf f ffnfjfnf f fjfbf fhff fhfnf fufuf f furnf fjr r fhf r fh rrhrbr rhrbrbru r rrhrbrnurrn rrhrhr r rhhrrnr ieehr r eiejwnwnej rjeiiwner durje riddnd ducncu jcjcdjr fnfifnf fhfjf ffnfnfjdnf fjc cncucdind fcjfjf fhducjdjdkdnf ddjdndidisodn ff f f dkdjdnd d djdjfb f f fjfufnf f fndicjc f fjddnf

October 6, 2024
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HH

Review after half of the novel

This has been a great story so far! I wish she would give in to him already and he would give in to her but otherwise it is nice. I like how the story is and I recommend it! I like how he takes control and how he cares for her. One of the best novels I have read so far! If you have any free time at all you should definitely open this story up and start reading it!

September 24, 2024
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Kim

Review after the novel completion

Ik vond het boek erg spannend . Het was een duidelijk verhaal al waren sommige stukken te langdraadig . Ik had verwacht dat het boek meer steamy zou zijn dat het was . De opbouw van het stuk dat gladys en massimo , plannen aan het paren maken om Tiffany bij Luciano weg te halen vond ik erg spannend . Ik kon van af dat moment bijna niet stoppen met lezen. Het stuk dat Tiffany ontvoerd was en er werd gedacht dat Luciano dood was ik echt vastgeplakt aan het boek. Ik was blij dat uiteindelijk allemaal is goed gekomen. Was eigenijk nog wel nieuwschierig wat rr met Massimo en Gladys verder gebeurd.

September 9, 2024
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Fii

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September 4, 2024
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JustagirlUser

Review after half of the novel

Its very nice and i love it. Because its very simple narrative its quick to read. I just wish that the cahpetrs were chepaper becaoıs it takes too long to unlock 1 chaprwr. Hsjsjs jsjdjd jdhdhd hdhshd hdhdhdhd hdjdjdj jdjdjd kdjdjd jdhdhdh jdjhd jdjdj snjdjdjdj s ndjdjdjdjd jdhdhd hdhdhd jdhdhdh jdhdjdj hdhdhdhsh hdhdjjdjsjd ndkslqğd jdııwmsn sjjdjdjw jeıejej jejjejw hwjwjwjwbj jejehej jejeje jehehe jdhwh jehejn jwjjw ke w. S w whwjwjw jehwjw jdjdj sorru about tye random words i need coins

August 30, 2024
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Ayla

Review after half of the novel

Hmm, honestly I’m not really sure what I fell about the novel. It’s still early to tell about the novel. Sometimes I don’t understand what the writer wrote. I feel it can be improve. But so far I want to read and find out what happened in the next chapter. The flow of the story is there but some parts is abit draggy. Characters wise don’t really like Tiffany, she’s 18 but act like a child. Love Luciano. Hopefully it will be worth my time & coins hahaha 🤭

July 10, 2024
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Mindinsky K

Review after half of the novel

Hey there! Sure, I can help with the review of "Red Riding Hood." In the story, Red Riding Hood is a young girl who wears a red hooded cloak and is on her way to visit her grandmother. She encounters a wolf in the forest who tricks her by asking about where she's going and then races ahead to the grandmother's house. The wolf then eats the grandmother and disguises himself in her clothes. When Red Riding Hood arrives, she notices something strange about her "grandmother" but falls into the wolf's trap. In the end, a woodsman saves them by cutting open the wolf's belly, and they all come out safely. The story teaches lessons about caution, trust, and the consequences of disobedience.

July 8, 2024
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cel

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Love it love love l l l m m m m m. M m m m m mm m m m m m m. M m m m m mm. Mm m m m m m m m m m mm m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m mm m m m m m m m m mm m m m m m mm m m m m m mm m m m m m

July 2, 2024
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Kish

Review after half of the novel

Loveeee ittttt. It really is a great story, a little bit long but it's good. I'm not done reading it yet so.....

June 29, 2024