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I think the story was verry good, keeps you wanting to know what will happen next. There are some things that will make it better. Such as in the chapters the name for the same carecter keeps changing such as grey grey they gave hime about 5 diffrent names. And the names of the plant she prosesses had so many names. I think the only thing that keeps origanal names are the people. Also they could make the intimate scenes more intimate and descriptive currently it just says they happen. Other then that it's a gd book

This book has some really great parts but at the same time I found portions of the book that almost made me decide to just quit reading it do to being so slow. However just stick it out and it turns out to be a decent book. But at this point I would love to read a follow up or sequel possibly about Natlies life now or Balan or Leon or Diabin. Or how Magnolias family ended up being given the pendant from Rotgar. That's all

It's a great story that I could not get enough of. There are quite a bit of grammar and spelling issues. A few of the names kept changing too, which was quite annoying. Those errors made it a little difficult to understand the story and which direction it was going, but I was too locked in and read on. Eventually I figured it out, but the story would have gotten an excellent rating if not for the poor writing errors that are simple fixes with a proof read. I am guessing that this story is translated, which could be why so many errors exist, but the story itself is quite beautiful. I really enjoyed it.