Pregnant For My Ex-Fiancé’s Father Reviews

Was not expecting the twists in this one. It's a good story. enjoying the character development this app has consistently had good books that keep me interested that don't cost anything to read, except the ads, which aren't really that bad. I am enjoying this app quite a bit. Sometimes there are spelling out grammatical errors but nothing that matters my love for a good story. Thank you for sharing your stories with us. It is very appreciated and enjoyed

I was very surprised to find that this book contained two separate stories. This book would have been better had it not had so many mistakes. It's hard to follow the story line when you get distracted by name changes, repeating chapters, and story line that's inconsistent. If the editing was different the story would have flowed better. I was able to finish the story and could understand what was happening throughout the book. I wish that the main characters had more interaction that wasn't about sex.

I love both books but o would really like to hear what happened to finishing the first one! We never got to read where she was pregnant by the ex’s father! Is there any way the first book can get finished please? There were too many inconsistencies in the second book with all the name changes, both first and last names, there was also pov’s that were mixed up! It honestly sounds liked the person failed you in their editing and proofreading! I do want to say “thank you” tho because both books were actually pretty good even with all the errors!

At first, I thought this book would pull me in but I’m still undecided. Some parts were interesting, especially the character development and a few moments. Other sections felt slow and I caught myself losing focus more than once. The writing style was good though sometimes descriptive for my taste. I can understand why people enjoy it but I’m not sure if it fully connected with me yet. I’ll probably sit with it a longer before deciding how I feel

This was will definitely remain in my top 5!! There was such a turn in events from one story to the other. While very similar stories in regard to the events that took place to create the story lines, were a bit different from each other. I enjoyed how each of the women in these stories started out as minimalists, they both became almost totally different individuals. The ending of each story really warm your heart to see how they both evolved. They even helped to change their partners. Great read.

It desperately needs a proof reader. It is disjointed, sequencing is off, it is incongruous, and it is scattered. Wanted to like it. For instance: in one scene Rowen has on a turtleneck and later a dress shirt with cuff links. In another Elora had on high waisted pants and a silk blouse and a few sentences later she was lifting the skirt if her dress. Characters were misnamed, people were magically transported in the middle of a scene. This is very expensive and your readers deserve better writing.

The story was good and steamy. Im not sure why it went from one novel right into the next, but its fine i guess. The first story was written better. Aside from the extensive amout of typos, duplicate chapters ( which im annoyed with since it cost money to read chapters), and random names that made it seem as though the story was cut and pasted from somewhere else, the second story was fine. Wouldn't recommend it though. Kinda felt like i got ripped off with the duplicate chapters and wouldn't want to subject anyone else to that.

So far I enjoy reading this novel. Liv did the right thing by leaving her cheating ex. Now she is sitting between her her ex wanting her back and his father who seems to be infatuated with her. I am looking forward to seeing the plot unfold. Is she going to end up with the father and how is his relationship going to end up with his son. Further when is the son going to realise that he has already burned his bridges where she is concerned.

Love it. It is so not like the predictable ones. I have concentration issues and I have tried several times to put it down and start a new one. But I just can't seem to do that. The language is good too. Unlike the ones which have grammatical mistakes. The only thing that I don't like is, how can you make someone write a review as big as eighty words to receive a reward? I mean if someone likes something, they can express it in a few words and so will someone who doesn't like it! But genuinely I love this book. If not, I wouldn't have bothered reading over forty chapters

It is impressive. Quite long before the good big news but I wanna find out. Lara also has a story and I can feel that it is spicy. The author did good and has a talent on making one curious. Like make you wander about the next chapter. I like it and thank you. The drama is also hectic not confusing but hot. Characters has good impressions and all mad 😂. But you stick to the storyline and that makes is more interesting and always attract my attention. I'm always curious Good one