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Shay

Review after the novel completion

Very detailed book keeps you wanting to read more praying the story line never stops. Sometimes I wish she would open up more and be more aggressive but then they way the twins are makes everything fall into place hoping for a great outcome she deserves love honestly. They way they treat her at times makes me wonder how bad can it get. Over all this is a very very good book and I'm happy I chose it to read. Haven't stopped since I started it.

June 3, 2024
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Ariana

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I love the story line but there are some grammatical errors and missing quotes around spoken works. Notating where one persons perspective ends and another’s begins would be very useful. And to notate when someone is thinking italics would also be useful. The erotic scenes could be more descriptive and detailed but overall they send me reeling. I love getting different perspectives of characters and would love to see more of the twins thoughts throughout the rest of the book.

January 23, 2024
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Trish

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December 13, 2023