Not the Daddies She Expected Reviews

Kedibone Makholwa
This is interesting but too sexually the story is about sex not much content but I keep reading and hoping somewhere along the lines the storyline will shift and give me a clear indication where the writer is going. Jackson, Jacob and Anna will be in love but someone who is a former sex slave is out there wanting to destroy their peaceful and loving relationship. Rhoda is very territorial about his brothers/cousin she behaves as if she is their girlfriend
February 2, 2025
Jay
I liked it for the most part but it required too many points to read chapters. I want to know what happened when Anna and the twins got to the family meeting. I also want to know who Alice is working with. I have a sneaking suspicion that it may be the twins’ mother or Rhoda. I like a good plot twist but I also like closure in a story. The ending left too many unanswered questions for me. Especially considering how many points it required.
January 30, 2025
Stephanie
The novel is intriguing and the story is full of surprises and hope. It is interesting to see the characters interact. The love story is unique. The character development strong. The story is so-so but the characters definitely make up for that. I would love to see these characters in a more complex story. The intimate scenes are well written, though they push the believable nature of the innocent characters in the beginning of the story. He corruption should have been a little harder to facilitate.
January 18, 2025
korina
One of the bloody best novels I have read! 😍 I wish it could have went on longer 🥵the characters and the scenes were amazingly written and made the story so hard to put down! The care scenes after the sex scenes was a good idea to write about especially when it rarely heard of! Still can’t tell who my favourite brother is Jackson or Jacob but maybe that’s cause the story goes off having them both. ❤️
January 15, 2025Tara Beasley
Love love love this book! The heat, the tension just all of it! I was really hoping there would be more to follow on, you can get really lost in a story like this one... Some spelling mistakes and sentances that didnt quite make sense but it wasnt hard to put 2 and 2 together to read the story and understand what was happening.... So far this is one of my favourites
January 8, 2025
S
This story turned me on so much. I loved the progress from the abuse she withstood from her father, selling g her to a degenerate, who wasn't even arou.d to the escapades that the twins got up to, after meeting her and how they proceeded from disinterested partners who saw her as just a sex slave to someone that they treasured. The storyline expansion with Rhoda, gave me something extra to look forward to, in the next storyline with them. What will happen at their family meeting? Will they just find a place, other than the limo, to have more full on glorious sex.
January 6, 2025
Shay
Very detailed book keeps you wanting to read more praying the story line never stops. Sometimes I wish she would open up more and be more aggressive but then they way the twins are makes everything fall into place hoping for a great outcome she deserves love honestly. They way they treat her at times makes me wonder how bad can it get. Over all this is a very very good book and I'm happy I chose it to read. Haven't stopped since I started it.
June 3, 2024
Ariana
I love the story line but there are some grammatical errors and missing quotes around spoken works. Notating where one persons perspective ends and another’s begins would be very useful. And to notate when someone is thinking italics would also be useful. The erotic scenes could be more descriptive and detailed but overall they send me reeling. I love getting different perspectives of characters and would love to see more of the twins thoughts throughout the rest of the book.
January 23, 2024
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December 13, 2023