Mated To The Cold Hearted Alpha
- Genre: Romance
- Author: Author Rinna
- Chapters: 219
- Status: Ongoing
- Age Rating: 18+
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Warning 18+ "You want me to f*ck you, I know it" "As much as you don't like me, you are my mate and you can't deny me" I stood up behind her, one hand holding her hip, and leaned down, my breath ragged against her neck, my voice husky. "I'll listen to your body... what it wants... and my body... what it needs. You won't feel the pain of correction like you did today... only the pleasure that a little bite of pain can bring." Mated to the cold-hearted Alpha
Joyce
The storyline started off well. Then I didn't like the way the Hyacinth character left the pack and the way her behavior was written. Now her and Leander are poisoned. Why? I can think of a few different ways the storyline could go. Now let's talk about the lack of proofing. Who the devil is Wayne? His name has popped up numerous times. Hyacinth's mother is also referred to in the last 5-10 chapters out of the blue as a current character. Many of the sentences don't make sense and I have to try to figure out who's talking and what they might be talking about. I'm volunteering to be the proof reader before the rest of the story is published.
April 13, 2025

