
Invisible To Her Bully
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Unlike her twin brother, Jackson, Jessa struggled with her weight and very few friends. Jackson was an athlete and the epitome of popularity, while Jessa felt invisible. Noah was the quintessential “It” guy at school—charismatic, well-liked, and undeniably handsome. To make matters worse, he was Jackson’s best friend and Jessa’s biggest bully. During their senior year, Jessa decides it was time for her to gain some self-confidence, find her true beauty and not be the invisible twin. As Jessa transformed, she begins to catch the eye of everyone around her, especially Noah. Noah, initially blinded by his perception of Jessa as merely Jackson’s sister, started to see her in a new light. How did she become the captivating woman invading his thoughts? When did she become the object of his fantasies? Join Jessa on her journey from being the class joke to a confident, desirable young woman, surprising even Noah as she reveals the incredible person she has always been inside.
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So far a few things are not adding up. The perspectives shift and with that so does the story. The plot has potential to be interesting. It’s just the shifting narrative. One minute Noah is standing up for her and then she says he never says anything. Same with her twin. One minute he actually defends her and then she says he never said a word. Then she’s upset when he doesn’t defend her, and when he does she tells him that she doesn’t need him to fight her battles. It’s just not consistent.
October 3, 2026
