His forbidden Muse Reviews

Whoa, what a range of emotions this book is giving me. I feel bad for her, I’m scared for her, excited for her, and so very intrigued. Didn’t realize that I’m into dark stuff like this. My only criticism so far is the writer really needs to go back and correct many spelling errors. There’s several chapters with a great deal of misspelling. It’s giving the feeling that the writing is rushed and not well thought out.

I've been following it on Wattpad, and recently on here since it was more updated here. The last chapter hit home pretty hard for me, because I've been there. I've attempted twice, and both times I was angry and confused as to why it failed. Our loved ones can do whatever they want to help us feel loved but in reality, we have to learn to love ourselves, and believe that we all are worthy of life, then make that decision.

So far its good however i am a bit confused. The author really didn’t do a background of the main characters. It gets confusing because one of the lead characters apparently has three fathers. Now if there was some information on that in the beginning of the story then maybe some of the names that are in the story would make sense. There are some grammatical errors but aside from that overall its a pretty good story. Hope the author updates soon.

The slow burn of this book really makes it so much better! The way she tries to deny her feelings for him only to all but run into his arms when he’s around is very much expected; but the levels to which he goes to be around her is almost intoxicating. The commitment to obtaining her like she’s the prized cow even tho he kind of hates everything her name stands for just make it burn so much sweeter!

I love Massimo! This is a good book so far ive been waiting for the main characters to get some action!! I cant wait to find out why Massimo is doin what he is currently doing. There area some typos but honestly the novel is really good you dont even notice it much. Im also curious to know the situation with Judas and Massimo. Something is quite intriguing with the twist in this novel. I am excited to see what else this author has to offer!!

This novel is amazing. Sometimes I’ll get bored of stories after a little while, but I haven’t with this one yet. If anything, this story has me really wanting to read the next chapter. The story between the two characters has you aching to see what happens next between them and what their different responses will be to each other, plus what’s happening around them with everyone else. It’s honestly just been a great read so far, thrilling to read, and like I said at the beginning amazing.

Its really good there are some typos and stuff but over all it's pretty good. The book does well to drive the narrative forward with suspenseful twists. Though it ends on a satisfying note, the story leaves the reader eager for more from the author. This book is a captivating and unputdownable read for fans of the genre, particularly those who enjoy stories that transcend time. I liked it but hated the way it ended. Really hoping there is a 2nd

Love it! Love it love it! M m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m

Absolutely brilliant story. I love all the characters and all there point's of view and how the author has described how they feel in the moment. Every family is messy, and the author has expressed that through their writing. I am impressed, and I am looking forward to reading more of this book if i am, honest Im hooked. It's a brilliant book, and i definitely will be sharing it with my friends as they have similar tastes in books

It's good a lil of typos nothing major. Some spots are hard to understand but as is expected was wondering if English is your second language as the wording isn't quite right gives the feeling that maybe English is a second language for you which is cool if it is. All in all its pretty good so far why are there 3 dad's living with one mom should explain that a lil more so others understand why that is happening