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Mr. Cowboy's Worst Nightmare Reviews

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tara

Review after half of the novel

The story is enjoyable overall, but there is a sudden shift to a second storyline in the middle, which feels abrupt and somewhat disorienting. While the secondary story is sweet and focuses on two background characters, the transition between the two narratives could have been smoother. Additionally, there are numerous instances of name switches and grammatical errors throughout, which make it challenging to stay fully immersed in the plot. It would have been better if the first story had been fully developed and concluded before introducing the second. However, I am hopeful that everything will come together in the end for a satisfying resolution.

January 21, 2025
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Estelle

Review after the novel completion

Roy and Annie part was good the Luke and Elena part wasn’t very well written Lots of errors Lots and lots of repetitive writing I felt like I was reading the same chapter over and over again Only reason I continued was for the Roy and Annie part The other part really sucked badly Lousy writing Bad spelling etc errors Lots and lots of repetitive writing I felt like I was reading the same chapter over and over again

January 19, 2025
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kat

Review after the novel completion

I absolutely loved it! Some of the later chapters were a little out of place with the wording and seemed to kind of drone on, but it was still a good storyline! I especially liked the second storyline, though it was a pretty sudden and seemed out of place. You could tell that all of the characters had different names at some point of writing bc sometimes they were called by the wrong names. But it was still a good read!

January 5, 2025
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qqq

Review after half of the novel

The first thing that comes to mind is that the name of the novel which attracted the attention of the readers. The author is very intelligent in describing the characters and scenes which makes the reader imagine the whole thing in a very good way. I like the novel and I am very keen to read the rest of the chapters to discover what will happen next. I will also recommend reading this book to my friends and colleagues. Thank you

January 3, 2025
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Becky Beck

Review after the novel completion

This book is like a roller coaster mixed with a spin and barf ride, and once you get off you say what was that. It started great. Then had the second part of Luke's story and the time-line in that didn't match what we knew about him and his wife from before. The names of characters were not consistent. Very repetitive during Luke's part. It would have been better to have a shorter book that followed better. I can't recommend this.

January 1, 2025
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Tammy

Review after the novel completion

This was the most confusing story I have ever read. It starts off good but then it switches to a whole other couple and their story. Then you get towards the end and it stars repeating the same 2 or 3 paragraphs over and over for like 5 chapters. When you get past that, it switches back to the original couple and finishes with their story. Just my opinion, both couples stories are good, but they should be separated and not together. I feel that would make more sense.

November 24, 2024
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Chaqaire Jenkins

Review after half of the novel

Mr. Cowboy worst nightmare is very intriguing. Once I started reading I couldn’t stop. The way the father was acting like he was innocent was very distasteful. I love the Lena stood up for her mother and out her dad out for the disrespect. The relationship development between Lena and Luke is quite interesting to see. I love how she didn’t rush into a relationship with him and he respected her boundaries and situation. Looking forward to more chapters.

October 24, 2024
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Katie D

Review after the novel completion

This bookn was such a page turner!! I love the fact that they did both Luke and Roy's stories and didn't just give random clips of their life. Besides the random errors (wrong character names) and chapter 64-67 sounded like a broken record(repeating paragraphs and phrases) I would definitely recommend this book! It held my attention and made me not want to put it down. Highly recommend to anyone who is looking for a good read with a serious whiplash of a plot line!

July 5, 2024
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Peggy Ardoin

Review after the novel completion

Oh my God. I love this story. It was a story that made me cry and laugh. I'm so happy that I they got married and starting a family. I do hope your writing has a second book. I can't wait to see it and read it if you do.it is one of the best books I ever read. Your a great writer. With a big heart. I wish I could write. Put my feelings on paper. I think I would feel better about myself. Keep up the great job your doing.

June 30, 2024
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Geena

Review after the novel completion

This book was an entertaining read. It was a bit of a shame when all of a sudden half way through it jumped to two completely different characters story with no warning and then suddenly jumped back to the originalcharacters. In the last few chapters there is quite a bit of repetition non-related paragraphs that seem to go on and the author has forgotten the characters names. I enjoyed it as a speed read, but it should have been proof read first.

June 30, 2024