Bound To The Cruel Mafia Reviews

I can't believe the length of the chapters, they were ridiculously short if this isn't an author who is only writing for money I don't know what the point is then. This is just money grabbing at its worst. There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes its laughable, has the author never heard of spell check its a useful tool that they maybe need to acquaint themselves with. The female lead is pathetic and needs to get a backbone

I love love love reading this book. I like the way the author built up each character and entwined our stories together I know there was one major event in the story I would have liked a few more plot twists maybe even talk more about her dad. I do wish that he would have made things right more in the middle of the book than towards the end. I'm hoping the author will write a second part to this book so we can know what happened between them since the story kind of just ended on the cliffhanger

I love this novel h h h h h hh h h hh h h h h h hhh h h h hh h h h hh h h h h h hh h h hh h h h h h h h h hh h h h h h h h hh h. Hh h h h h h h hh h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h hh. H h

I’m honestly not sure how I feel about this story. The writing and grammar are really good. The story line is really unbelievable and unique. But I’m curious about her father. Where is he? And what happened to him? All of a sudden he’s not mentioned. At all. I find that extremely disturbing and disheartening that he’s been seemingly forgotten. I’m also bothered by the idea of any woman being portrayed as so naive and innocent. I hope this gets better and ties up all the loose ends.

So far it’s good. He seems to have a weird way of punishing a girl that he owns or cherishes. It almost makes you wonder if he is bipolar. He definitely has a lot of anger issues along with communication which is not necessarily his own point. She still seems like she’s pretty naïve and makes you wonder if her life was actually sheltered. Jealous, they can do crazy things to people wonder what’s gonna happen next

What a surprising novel. The character progression is awesome and I love the tension between Nero and Vera, leaves you begging for more. I would love to see the passionate scenes drawn out more given their tension build up to finally get them to the realisation that they are intensely into each other but still a good read. I enjoyed the suspense when they captured Vera and thought that was a great break in the intent of the tone. A worthwhile read all round.