Betrothed To The Mafia Lord Reviews

The plot is interesting though very slow moving. The main two characters just keep doing this awkward dance about. We're meeting new characters with background info given but they have yet to become very relevant. still , it seems in some areas the author is just filling space. I think if you have the time to kill than this book can be a decent read.i do hope that the story starts to pick up a little bit more. There are some areas where grammar could be edited.

I couldn't get enough...Need more chapters asap. Although there were quite a few typos, the book kept me in a choke hold. Luca and James's relationship is the best. The way they interact with one another kept me laughing at times. I did wish that Sophia had more of a backbone. All that darn crying was irritating my soul but then I realized it's just a book😂 I can honestly say that it was so hard for me to stop reading when I had things to do like cook dinner for my family. I can't wait to read more!

It has a great plot so far. Hoping it stays that way. Only complaints are it can drag out & the beginning of each chapter is repeated from the previous. Best thing is there are many parts that leave it to your imagination, although going a little in depth on some (which is the best part good books have). Spelling and some gamer are all throughout, but that is an easy fix. I do like how it takes the fact of some one who is ruthless has a very soft side. Which is completely true in life! Most whom seem absolutely ruthless and no morals are the ones who put up a great front, they are deep people whom work the hardest in life.

It’ll be interesting to see how the characters progress through out the rest of the novel, especially since the makn male and female character have not yet admitted that they both have feelings gor each other. It’ll be interesting to see how the characters progress through out the rest of the novel, especially since the makn male and female character have not yet admitted that they both have feelings gor each other. It’ll be interesting to see how the characters progress through out the rest of the novel, especially since the makn male and female character have not yet admitted that they both have feelings gor each other.

This book is honestly truly amazing. There has not been a moment were I wanted to stop reading it. It does not loose the entertaining moments. I love the love they have for eachother. The possessiveness and admiration that Luca has is truly cute. I’m intrigued to see more with what happens with Ryan and her. There has not been a moment where I felt like you could of gone further into the detail or you left as a Clift hanging moment.

This Novel is very interesting. It starts off really slow and starts to bring you into the world of the Italian Mafia a little at a time. It shows what the world is like for a daughter born into the mafia is like, but it also show that not everything is as it seems. When a Mafia Lord marries a girl who is just barely of age and he surprises her by not being the scary mean nasty Mafia Lord she has heard about all her life.

Excellent story but a bit disappointed with the ending, there wasn't a ending, just stopped dead at the end, so no idea if they got a happy ending or not, that is the only thing that let the book down, big time, no manage of a second book or follow up to it. Over all book was nerve wrecking and kept u on the edge of ur seat but like I've already said, I was totally let down by the ending.

This is a unique take on a Mafia romance. I love that Luca is a true gentlemen when it comes to Sofia. He doesn't force her to do anything that she doesn't want to do. He is fiercely protective of his family and friends. I also love that this entire story is actually based in Italy as opposed to somewhere in the US. It makes it feel more authentic and I am really looking forward to what is coming up in the novel!

Love the story..there are some writing errors. But nevertheless she describes the characters nicely. The story vould get to a litle more conversation between luca snd sofia by now.. that would make me more satisfied in the whole storyline. How all the characters are discribed makes you thing you think you now them. So love the storyline.. but a bit more action or even conversation between the two main characters would be really nice allready. Thnx for the story

A very good book but also a very slow moving book in regards to the story hope it gets into a faster pace it seems like it is dragging on and on at this point and seems kinda repetitive just a few new things here and there I am ready to see how the relationship between Luca and Sophia turns out Do they eventually fall in love or are they gonna be strangers on the same house for the whole book