A Fate So Cruel Reviews

This book made me so freaking mad! So the fmc was an annoying, judgmental, hot-headed, obnoxious, and barely-grown 20 year old drunkard who constantly made poor choices and ridiculed the other girls (some of whom are a bit slutty, I'm sure) who mostly just aren't self-righteous virgins who were taught to think of sex as some precious flower or something... Or, you know, just normal women who like an active sex life? 🙄 But, because everyone thinks she's some gorgeous, sexy, strong and intelligent gem of a girl, they all throw themselves at her and she has to choose one of all these super-hot and way-too-good-for-her princes, and she gets to be a queen in the end. There's zero sex, just an FYI. Just a couple instances of 3rd base (but only for the girl, of course) and tons of kissing, and the book ends with her still an unmarried virgin. There are tons of typos throughout, some repeated chapters or parts of chapters (including mixed up, wrong and repeated names) and it's either gone through a translation (doubtful) or someone was pounding a thesaurus to try to make the whole thing sound smarter, but a lot of the words or phrases were not used correctly... Very disappointing because it starts out as an interesting book with a captivating plot, and then just goes downhill the rest of the way. Very few high points with lots of added drama, author/reader confusion and almost no sexy stuff. Not worth the read, honestly. The author also hasn't corrected any of the major issues, even a year after the comments calling out repeated chapters and such. Still, I gave it a rating of 2 out of 5. It could be even worse, though not by a lot.

I love this story so much! I love how simple can tell all the princes apart, and how brave she is, even though she’s trying to be stubborn. I really like Lucien a lot and want her to choose him, but it seems like her and Darius like each other a lot as well. I guess we will have to see how it goes from there, and see who wins her heart over completely. I also hope that Leah will be ok too.

I'm loving it so far. Very interesting storyline and Characters just wish there was more backstory for some of the characters. Maybe more dialogue between MC and her BFF. Also could use more descriptive writing it's a bit hard to picture characters appearance. Major problem it the chapters are only 5 pages and cost 80 to unlock. That too expensive and as much as I am enjoying reading this .. its just not worth paying that much for 5 pages.

Don't waste your time this book sucks. The Author changes the names of characters constantly. And at the very end she completely changed the two characters she mixes the back story and even they eye color. The main character is a acholoic who randomly has terminal cancer that you find out about in like chapter 100. She BTW is also be stocked since she was 16. The entire thing is a crap popsicle. The best park to this book was the posts at the end of each chapter.

I am so disappointed. I wish I could get a refund for this story. The author clearly doesn't know what they wrote. Names were all messed up. Storyline especially towards the end was all jacked up. Details were wrong. Ugh this was just sad. It has great potential but this author dropped the ball big time. Im not sure what happened or why this was so poorly put together but it's a disservice to paying customers. It seems quality isn't this apps strong suit.

This is a great novel. At this point of the book, I was just hoping that the princes would do something to ease Simone and the fact that maybe or not she would have to leave her old life. But hopefully this will arrive soon. Also, that’s too bad that Damien is not fighting more for her and realized very early that Simone is not for him. That makes it only duel for her and three is so much better than two…

This is a good story Simone is literally a vibe lmao kxnxbxjz. B. Bc. H b bc. B. B n h. B. B. B. H. Fb. H. Bc h. Bc. B. B g b v V if h C b. Bc bc. H b b b b b b bb. B bb. B b b bb b g b b b b b b bb b b b b b b b b b b bb n h. Bb. Bb

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I like the idea of three brothers death of the vampires. That’s the intriguing part and I like the idea of 9 Women all around the same age so it makes it more interesting and when that’s unique with an attitude, I didn’t stand out he doesn’t like vampires, but then she starts developing a crush on them and then they start liking her more than the others. That’s intriguing part and then she wants them to show her your true selves will each of them do it or will they just continue showing her

The story is really interesting I like the fact that she wants to be independent and does not fall for the dreamy fantasy that the princes are showing and obviously she's right there is something that they haven't told them this is a different story from everything I've read so far and there's a twisted story out of all why would another creature want a human to be their queen and also the personality of the characters is different from all fairytales we know