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The Unwanted Matrimonial Reviews

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Janne Fret

Review after half of the novel

I really like this novel. I like the characters, Damon and Layla, and especially how their thoughts are described thouroughly in the different points of view. Some chapters are short, but others really make up for it. I really likes the first real kiss of Damon and Layla. I am only halfway through but I can not wait to read the next few chapters. I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes to read these kind of billionaire love stories.

May 6, 2024
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Niitraa

Review after half of the novel

Ok so I was completely engulfed in this book from the moment I started it. At first I was like where are we going with this, but I’m glad I stuck it through. There has been a lot of character growth and development which I enjoy and what makes a good book to me. Now being mid-book we are in the middle of the biggest plot twist which was very much unexpected! I’m looking forward to seeing what happens and what comes next.

May 3, 2024
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Kelly Sandra

Review after half of the novel

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May 3, 2024
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Anthonia Omoregbe

Review after half of the novel

Very nice novel. It keeps you hooked practically and very interesting storyline . I would say it’s better if the writer of the book let us know when the times change. Like if there where talking and you want to pass to the next scene write like (2hours later) or (2weeks later) because in the middle of reading changing the day of conversation without letting the readers know that you’re changing the day and you just find yourself reading about another day it’s kind of difficult but apart from that the writer did a perfect job.

April 29, 2024
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Hair Surgeon

Review after half of the novel

First I kept wondering why Layla had attraction for Damon Like the guy is arrogant and (rolling my eyes) rude!!! But lay was surely the sweet part to compliment him to make an awesome bittersweet combo I find it very interesting that someone will give up their baby just like that? Will she come back for Dylan junior? Will she ask for some sort of compensation? Or would she keep to her words and just stay away? Now Layla is pregnant!!! I have waited for that part for soo long I commend the writer for dragging that out because I kept coming to read hoping to see the line “Layla is pregnant!!’ I am having a good read I must say!!

April 28, 2024
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Veronica Pereira

Review after half of the novel

Good story, but lacs professional side to her for my taste. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

April 25, 2024
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Maria Assam

Review after the novel completion

Intriguing, captivating. Couldn't stop reading! I loved how the ups and downs played out in the novel, just like in our normal lives. We go through these motions in our relationships, sometimes just as heartbreaking as depicted in the story line. Loved how the grudges were resolved in the end, how the families came together and united as one. Wish that this story would never end, I literally couldn't put it down. Glad that the mean girls got what they deserved!

April 25, 2024
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Bibi

Review after the novel completion

A lovely story with a lot of twist and turns. At some point to many. A unperfected perfect love story who makes you cry laugh and sometimes both. Layla the one who's accept Daman the way he is with his flaws his mistakes and Daman who's do everything for his wife. There is just one thing that I wish would have happen and that is that Q and Lelo would also have found a partner or maybe fall in love with each other...

April 21, 2024
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Anca Niculae

Review after the novel completion

It was a good story, love the fact that the action took place really quick. It had everything: romance, love, hate, jealousy, family time, babies, action, like I said everything.I would have liked a little more emphasis on the action parts. It quickly went over how the issues were resolved. When a plot arose, a problem was quickly extinguished. there is no suspense. Love that had a few chapters, but it could be more shorter, because it insisted on really unimportant parts, aspects of life.

April 20, 2024
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nash

Review after the novel completion

If you're looking for a captivating romance novel that will sweep you off your feet, the unwanted matrimonial is a must-read. Set in this book tells the enchanting story of Layla and Damon , whose chemistry leaps off the pages. The plot is beautifully crafted, with just the right blend of tension, passion, and tender moments. You have a remarkable talent for character development, making Layla and Damon feel like old friends by the end of the first chapter. The protagonists' journey is heartfelt and genuine, drawing readers into their lives and making them emotionally invested in their happiness. What truly sets this book apart is its ability to evoke a range of emotions. From laughter to tears, the author skillfully guides the reader through a rollercoaster of feelings, leaving them turning pages long into the night. The romantic scenes are tastefully written, striking a perfect balance between sensuality and emotional depth. Additionally, the supporting cast enriches the story, each character adding layers of complexity and contributing to the main narrative. The dialogue is witty and realistic, enhancing the overall authenticity of the relationships portrayed. The unwanted matrimonial is a testament to your prowess as a storyteller, and I eagerly anticipate their future works. If you're a fan of romance novels that leave you with a warm heart and a smile on your face, do yourself a favor and pick up a copy of this delightful book. Highly recommended!

April 9, 2024