The Poisoned Promise Reviews
Rhonda Potter
Review after the novel completion
It seems like a chapter or more are missing. When did Isiah discover that Marie was his? When did his mother find out about Marie. What happened to the sister. She hasn't been mentioned in several chapters now. With he way she was hanging onto Isaiah, it seems strange that she has just vanished. Some chapters seem to be repeats of previous chapters and there seems to be a lot of jumping around from one subject to another. Still confusing in parts like chapters/conversations are missing. Contradictory versions of the main story line and supporting characters throughout, but, overall a good story.
May 6, 2026