The Mafia's Maid Reviews

A really good story, but the mix up with names from half way through was really disappointing. Don’t understand how it’s even possible to not get the names right when you are writing a story…. Like some others have commented, the last chapters felt really sloppy and rushed. From the gun shot and Rafael went in a coma - months skippa fast, and all of a sudden he’s standing in his own house alls strong and wealthy… quite tragic that the end was rushed, didn’t make the story or the characters right…

There is some inconsistencies buy overall it keeps me engaged! I wished it did not cost a lot read each chapter but I am happy that you can watch 3 adds to rwsd the chapter foe 3. The characters are well written and you end up liking the characters you are supposed go like and disliking the characters that you should. Some scenes feel rushed. The chapters could be longer if they cost 60 something coins for each one. The movement of the plot is nice as well!

Good so far Cancer really Why He always has problems Forgot they were supposed to be in Italy tho better get to the flashback parts soon before readers start losing interest Good so far Cancer really Why He always has problems Forgot they were supposed to be in Italy tho better get to the flashback parts soon before readers start losing interest Good so far Cancer really Why He always has problems Forgot they were supposed to be in Italy tho better get to the flashback parts soon before readers start losing interest

Love it Love it Love it I am totally hooked from the very first moment. Also I am intrigued of what will happen. I am courious to find out why he has been so mean to her, there must be a reason. It is really annoying to have to watch so many adds btw each chapter and the chapters are not very long…. I have read 1/3 of the book and I would recommend it. I feel sorry for Claire many times

I would like to have an epilogue. The characters were good. But no mention of what happened to Claire’s father? No explanation of how Rafael got shot was surprising. There were quite a few errors throughout the book. Sometimes confusing the characters. When paying so much for reading on these apps it really feels like a ripoff to see each sentence double or triple spaced. I love reading but feel the need to delete the reading app for being to expensive.

Its good but confusing at the same time but im loving it now so Sweet i feel so bad for claire though she seems so sweet het al of that happens to her poor baby but yeah its okey.Oké eind iej iej ieme ieme iemand ineen dundr ofjnf of ifn ring jfn jen h na ctf ff. E rccf crc f. Ffccf. Rccf g h. Hij. H h. H g h hvhbh. H NBK ink jijj. U ik. Ik. J

This book was just really amazing the characters were fantastic just beyond words I really enjoy stories like these it was just wow..amazing and just plain awesome lml I have like no words I really loved the book like wonderful job 100% can’t wait to read more books just like this and I highly recommend to read this one because you will not be disappointed at all!!! I’m glad for a happy ending it was beautiful and lovely story telling!!!!❤️❤️❤️

I’m halfway through the story, and it’s really good so far. It caught my attention right from the beginning and keeps me interested all the way through. The writing is smooth and well done, and it makes me want to keep reading to see what happens next. The characters feel believable, and the atmosphere is both exciting and engaging. Overall, it’s a very captivating story, and I’m really looking forward to finishing it. H j h

It’s cute. A little cliche and a little predictable and definitely needs a proofreader but overall I enjoyed it. It is definitely a quick and a very easy read which I like. Not overly complicated and I would likely read other novels by this author in the future. I’m often interrupted when I’m trying to read a book and this one was one I could stop about anywhere and any time then pick back up without missing a beat.

Decent story line, characters are pretty good. Found this book and was just reading to pass the time and found I was watching ads to get coins to continue reading. Almost done the book now. Would like to see the characters come together in a more natural way it kinda seems like one chapter she was falling apart then the next she’s in love with him so it kinda jumps but overall it’s not a bad read at all!