The Billionaire's Unexpected Heir Reviews

I like the idea of this novel but it is very confusing as the lead characters have changed names, locations and there are multiple errors with names of siblings and friends. The lead characters have gone from an English CEO & his PA looking out over the Thames to a CEO & his assistant living in Paris with what appears to be Chinese heritage and food preferences looking out over the Seine. There is also some chapters with a lot of french which is not translated. I couldnt even copy & paste to easily translate. I spend the time doing translations and im glad i did as they were key pieces of the story and well written. There is confusion about timelines too. How far along is the pregnancy? In the last few chapters the CEOs surname changed from Stone to Hart. But there is another character with the surname Hart!! Also there are multiple chspters that repeat certain situations buf have different details. Not just a different perspective, which would be fine to have a Lucas/Arthur POV and then a Elena/Stella POV, but there are conflicting details and actual outcomes. Please try to get this right in the remaining chapters which are still be written.

You messed up quite a few names I love the story. It’s unselling that we didn’t get to see the baby born.and I feel it cost to much for ending like this story was great but you said she’s five months now you’re saying she’s not that for a long still as they’re gonna be a part two of the story not that I don’t know because I’ll probably delete this app soon because I don’t like paying for stuff