Surrogate mother of the hated CEO Reviews

“Surrogate Mother of the Hated CEO” delivers a gripping blend of emotional turmoil, family secrets, and slow-burn romance. The heroine’s strength and vulnerability make her instantly compelling, while the CEO’s complex, wounded persona adds depth to every confrontation. The plot moves quickly, weaving tension with heartfelt moments that keep you invested. Though dramatic, it maintains a satisfying balance between angst and growth. Fans of intense contemporary romance will enjoy this addictive, page-turning journey. It is a story that lingers long after reading.

Very good book. You need to proof read before posting. Pronouns need corrected and still some parts that are not in English. Language translations do not always coincide with each other. I also think having the option to purchase the remainder of the novel, after the initial free chapters, is a good idea or erning free chapters when reading on a daily basis. Having the audio option is also good. I like to listen while l working or doing projects around the house.

First let me say that this was a good book 📖, great storyline just hard to follow at times. Second I like how she went from being an orphan who found out who she really was,her struggles of being betrayed by the ppl closest to her and finding out that ppl she barely knew became her closest allies all while being pregnant by someone she didn't even know and growing into a woman of strength through who considered her a nobody

This whole novel was very good to read! Growing up in a orphanage then leaving when of age, everything was a happening in her life was going wrong. A person she was close to and treated a as sister was the most horrible person. Down on her luck she went to donate some of her eggs for money, but that is where it all went wrong and ended up pregnant by the most richest man whom she did not like. Will all her problems the two ended up falling in love. Caroline finally ended up meeting her biological mother before giving birth. She married her children's father. After the twins were around nine her husband and she ended up adopting three more children and there life was complete.

The story has a really good plot. It gives you that hope the heroine will get the man in the end if they are able to get past all the obstacles. I like how Caroline has such a giving heart despite all that she has been through and the things done to her. Maximus really needs to get a clue and open his heart to love. The biggest problem I have is grammatical errors, especially proper pronoun usage. It makes it difficult to know who is talking and who they are referring to. Also, based on my confusion at times, vocabulary isn’t used appropriately.

It’s a great storyline and an original idea but the pronouns are completely out of sync from the 1st chapter. It’s obviously a badly translated story but also edges the ridiculous when it is supposedly set in Pasadena, CA. Sometimes it’s really hard to tell who is thinking/speaking but I’m going to try to keep going because it’s an engaging story. Other readers have made similar comments but it doesn’t improve the proofreading. There is a bit of mystery regarding the main characters’ background.

The actual story line is good I don't take that away. In fact it's the reason I'm even still reading this story. But the author seems not to have proof read or had someone else read the story before posting. There are a lot of grammar errors. You have to figure out of the character is male or female. Sometimes it's in mid sentence when the pronouns change. It is very annoying and takes away from the good read. But the story line is a good one.

I like the story of the novel. It’s just hard to read as the pronouns are not accurate. When talking about the red head who’s pregnant they use he and him as well as the men in the story it’s she or her. I think if more time went into Proofreading it would be a much more enjoyable read. I hate that I have to have a minimum number of words as I feel I said my review before this.

Who is the editor for this novel! I mean really any person reviewing this novel should be able to tell that the wrong pronouns are being used. He/she, his/hers makes a big difference. I don't know how many times I have gone back and try to unscramble what was going on. I can't believe I have continued to pay for this novel. You are making big bucks the least you could do is get the pronouns correct.

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