Reborn to Ruin Him: The Heiress's Game Reviews

Really am not liking howv b gist c one is going. I assume eventually the go o d guys will see in but the twists and turns are getting annoying. Just when it seemed like things were going well and b heading TY a good ending we start I very with a new chess board. I was ready fir an ending not a restart. I do like the characters though so hopefully the end us worth the c wair

The novel was interesting with unexpected twists and turns. Lyra suffered greatly each time before death and rebirth. Each time she died, her rebirth was more complex and revealed more people’s true personalities. The other characters were unpredictable. There were secrets and hidden agendas. There were unexpected alliances that made it challenging to know who could be trusted. Everyone was after power and money and willing to murder to get it. I was surprised that Jason and Vanessa were not locked up after keeping Lyra tied up in the basement for multiple days. The police came to the house. However, I was happy that Lyra got justice in the end for all the wrong done to her and so many others.

In a nutshell, this book is all over place with new random characters introduced throughout the book. The plot follows a steady story, but there are lots of parts that feel like they don’t belong or don’t make sense. The main characters being lawyers, sometimes act like they are in middle school, while they are in court or some other public function. Even though I’ve addressed mostly the negative parts of this book, it does keep me interested in what will happen next. This book would highly benefit from an editor!

Very entertaining if a little confusing at times. This story is full of surprises, which do add up by the time you get to the end. There are a lot of really nasty people in it so I’m glad karma got them all eventually. The ‘chapters’ are spread out so it gets a touch irritating that you need to either spend lots of coins or watch a myriad of ads to get through. But I really enjoyed reading it so thank you.

It kinda goes round and round. I find it difficult to keep names straight for who is doing what to whom. The pages are too spread out with large spaces between sentences. This makes the chapters short with information. I would rather see more sentences on each page so I could better understand without interruptions. The information is too hard for me to keep what’s happening straight. The story seems to string the reader along by adding more people and situations.

Enjoying this novel i must say it definitely has alot of plot twist. Just wish it wasn't so confusing. I mean after finding Lyra why wasn't Jason or Vanessa in jail or at arrested. They were able to move on and still cause trouble. How can Jason get the law frim back after being voted out. Also after Lyra almost passed out i though Vincent brought her to the emergency room. Im just glad that she isn't dead. Can't wait until Vincent finds.

The book as a whole was pretty good. Sometimes it got confusing bc of names being in the wrong place or words beings doubled but I got the just of it. More information about what happened to Lyra’s parents needs to be told. Also what’s the purpose of changing Lyra’s name if everyone knew who she was. I couldn’t understand what actually changed about her bc from the moment she came back everyone knew who she was and she only denied it a handful of times.

There were a lot of typos that would benefit from an editor OR someone to read it out loud. I enjoyed the overall storyline but was also confused by so much. How is it possible that people can be kidnapped and beaten, the police arrive but no one is arrested? (Vanessa keeping Lyra locked away in her own house). I don't understand why Kelvin said that Lyra had killed him in another life? I feel like Lyra would have mentioned that in her thoughts, like when he raped her. It had potential but needs some work.

The way her husband and friend did her in her first life was crazy. Plus the fact that her husband’s family, the friend or husband had a hand in her child’s death truly shows how people are so cruel. But the fact that they wanted to take everything from her and leave her with nothing. They didn’t even want her to have her freedom. But then she comes back do a second chance and gets revenge but she didn’t realize it was more players in play than what she thought moving against her. She loses again but gets third chance. Third times a charm.

The was a lot going on in thus novel, sometimes I had to repeat a chapter just to make sure that I understand and sometimes it went unnecessarily too long. I really loved the end though because Lyra is finally happy with the family that she longed for and hoped for since Jason, and I'm happy that everyone one who wronged her got the justice that they deserved...I loved the ending more because Vimcent truelly loved her and he fought for her as much as she fought for him