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Sonia Botao

Review after half of the novel

So far thisbhave been thé best novel.l realy love this book.pliz continue to update.l want to.see how à they going to their brisent hearts. I wish all thr best to all the People Who à redingote this book.keep up Aurther.hooe you White more novel. A they going tobhave an happy end.pliz dont hang us.we love you .plz l'ont have any words to say more tha l have say.go don Delano and Prospenia we awaiting for happy end.thanks we love u

September 22, 2024
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Meowser

Review after half of the novel

The organization of the story is horrible! There are random chapters and paragraphs that are from other stories. Names are constantly changing or misprinted as other people. Chapters keep skipping back and forth like the author has no idea what was last written about. Words used are not used in the location they are suppose to be taken place in. This book could be decent but it is poorly written and very sexually abusive. I WOULD NOT RECOMMEND TO READERS!!

May 29, 2025
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mohaleagnes

Review after the novel completion

Denial love that the guy has for this woman is pure but he can't tell of his nature and her loving him beyond everything he has done to her is unbelievable,, so I this is book teaches about how weak you can be when met with someone whom you love deeply but can't understand the feelings you have for them but mostly important is the kids can bring parents together and love is the most beautiful thing in the world

April 17, 2025
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Savi

Review after half of the novel

He’s toxic control jealous and possessive she’s a young inexperienced girl I love this story she’s from a poor background her parents died when she was a small girl and her aunt took her in and she was married with 6 kids and her husband was always complaining she helped around the house cooking cleaning etc she worked and saved her money because she had gotten and scholarship to her dream university and she when to a fight club where she meet the big bad mafia boss

March 12, 2025
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Chante Du Preez

Review after half of the novel

This is an interesting story. I like the characters. It could do better with the spelling but yes interesting story so far . If you like age gap stories this is one of it intriguing. Not like the other age gap stories a person read . Good story yes . I like it so far . And I hope the people reading this likes it to . This is a good story if you are also into mafia badboy good girl

February 26, 2025
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Debbie Pharis

Review after half of the novel

The Don is a powerful carator ihe has me on the edge of my seat . I find myself crying angry and even to see him on his knees begging for forgiveness. I want to see him feel her pain enough to realize by viewing a camera finding out she was tricked and have them admit each one involved pay for the brute force he applied to his now wife revenge for her no mercy . I'd also like to see her having time with her children alone the Don should vow not to touch her again until he shows compassion and recognition making her his equal. I love this it is as real as it gets in a life as a monster . Excellent can't wait to finish and see what other books you have written.

February 20, 2025
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kacy carpenter

Review after the novel completion

Well, I am pretty sure the novel isn’t finished but I can tell you Lucien went Lucien to Gastonat the last chapter. I am over here trying to figure out just exactly who is Gaston and when did we ever hear about this character before. So you might take a look at that. And I do hope this is not like the last novel I read where it said there was 77 chapters and only 60 were there with no end to it. I would be devastated.

November 1, 2024
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Jacqueline Colon

Review after half of the novel

How they meet is wild but i don’t know it seems like they have a rough start but im sure throughout the story they will learn to love each other, he is being a little rough at first but im sure with time he will become nice but not before he mentally and physically hurts her in some way and it’s easy to tell he is not trusting in anyway but i think she will be one the to bring that wall down

October 9, 2024
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Mayra Cunningham

Review after half of the novel

This is a great book ! No major gramatical errors and the description is good too I did not like the fact the author took too long to complete the chapters but I am glad it has been completed! I am very interested in this book and wonder how would it end ! Part of me want porsepina to run away with her children and the other part wants her to stay with Lucien and make him a better man, I can honestly say I am intrigued

October 3, 2024
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Dineo Darlene Maditsi Phasha

Review after the novel completion

Pros is depressing me now.I don't even know what to say about her cause she is just so...after all she went through and she's going through, she still has space in her heart for him🤯🤯🤯 I just can't anymore, I don't like her and feel for her kids. I love her boy child though, he knows not to trust the man, his sister is a sellout so don't like her but I don't blame her since she takes after her mother

October 1, 2024