I Slapped My Fiancé—Then Married His Billionaire Nemesis Reviews

I really liked the novel. Compared to other books on this platform there was significantly fewer grammatical errors. Only a few instances of mixing up writing he or she. It could still use more editing, to make some things clearer. For example some elements of the story that happened in 1 day last several chapters, but they could be condensed to just a few and they story would flow better and still convey the key details. There were a few loose ends to the story. We see the main family several years in the future happy and healthy. But before the time jump, there were some conflicts that weren't resolved. Genevieve (I'll call G) had been ruining Mira's business, was this fixed. It briefly said while Mira was pregnant she went to work at the shop but we don't know if the shop is struggling or doing well. What about her French shop and all the jewelry stores she now owns. G was also claiming to be having Ash's baby since she thought she slept with him but after she went to his parents for help there was no other mentioned. Ash had issues with his family, he was supposed to be sending his father to Africa. Did he ever go? What about Mira's family? Told her dad died but what about mom and sister, cousins? What about the Granger family? What about all Mira and Ash's friends? We're left wondering about them. If you thought of this book as a tv show, they were main regular characters for ½-¾ of the way, then they are just gone without any resolution. So with the editing and then adding chapters to resolve plot points it could be an exceptional book.

It's so good. Though the premise may be a bit cliché, the dialogs are fast-paced and funny, and I really enjoy the characters. Especially Ashton, I mean, he's so cute I want to bite him. I'm just out here giggling at each of his POVs. The only downside for me is the fact that she still doesn't know he's in love with her. It's a bit frustrating. I just want them to finally get together for real and be all adorable.

Super! A pleasant surprise and page turner. If you’re looking for an easy read, this is for you. If you are looking for a distraction, this is for you. No long drawn out scenes, it’s snappy and decisive. The perfect way to spend a few hours, but be warned, it’s not easy to put down! I will be looking out for more of this authors work, I took a chance and very glad I did. Highly recommend!

It has a nice storyline and description of surroundings. Clear explanation of situations. Love the different points of view. The difference between the two main character's thought process about each situation. Can not wait for the moment when the characters realize their feelings for each other and she sees that she is the girl he has been stuck on for years. Also wish she wasn't stuck fighting a ex she doesn't want and that does not want her. I want his mom to let her go

I was concerned about a book with nearly four hundred chapters but I really did like this one. There was family drama, work life balance issues and a cute romance. I was also very grateful that the amount of coins needed for each chapter was low so I could keep reading through the end. Thank you thank you for that. It would have taken so much longer to read it otherwise. I hope you enjoy this title as well. Bye.

Very Nice, novel. I enjoyed it. Maybe some of the in detepth romantic moments. But is perfect guilty pleasure book to read. Quite addictive, strong female character. The dynamics between them is changing quite often, but at the end is great. All the females from his past turned out to be mean and revengful. Unfortunately something like that is rare in real life, cold Ceo, long lasting love for her. "The enemy of my enemy is my friend "

The book is rather fun with lots of twists and turns! Plenty of intriguing situations and characters pop up throughout the story. A lot of them are really interesting to read. I wish that the heroine hadn’t needed to be rescued so many times. It would have been fun for her to save herself from villains with her own hands. I also wish that I knew more of what happened to the perpetrators. Overall I enjoyed the book and do recommend it.

I have to say that I did enjoy the book. I was happy when everyone was banished from harassing Mira else and trying to kidnap her. The book was way too long to get through, but I'm glad Ashton got the woman he fell in love with. The kids, especially Minnie are hilarious. Mickey with his serious demeanor and Minnie who couldn't stand her mother's touch as an infant turns into her mother's champion. Yes it was too long, but it was a pleasure to read. I would have liked to have read more about Priya. I think she deserved someone and why couldn't Cassian and Yvaine found their way back to each other? I felt that all the suspense and intrigue going on was a little too much.

It started out so fun and exciting, then it slowed down and started getting boring with manipulation, stupid drama, weak female, and weird family titles. She calls her ex future mother in law aunt! Is it because she grew up with this women loving her like her mom was supposed to that she called her aunt or because she really is her aunt [ewww!]? I am glad that she finally married the love interest, but it took over 30 chapters to setup, I hope it gets good again soon or I'll sadly have to stop wasting my hard earned coins.

Although overall I really and truly did enjoy the novel, I think the last batch of chapters really didn't add anything to the overall story. I mean they were nice and entertaining, but it felt like it just drew the ending out to make the novel longer, and could have been summed up in just a few chapters instead. Could also have summarized a little more at the end about the final disposition of other previous main characters and what became of them.