I Slapped My Fiancé—Then Married His Billionaire Nemesis Reviews

I really liked the novel. Compared to other books on this platform there was significantly fewer grammatical errors. Only a few instances of mixing up writing he or she. It could still use more editing, to make some things clearer. For example some elements of the story that happened in 1 day last several chapters, but they could be condensed to just a few and they story would flow better and still convey the key details. There were a few loose ends to the story. We see the main family several years in the future happy and healthy. But before the time jump, there were some conflicts that weren't resolved. Genevieve (I'll call G) had been ruining Mira's business, was this fixed. It briefly said while Mira was pregnant she went to work at the shop but we don't know if the shop is struggling or doing well. What about her French shop and all the jewelry stores she now owns. G was also claiming to be having Ash's baby since she thought she slept with him but after she went to his parents for help there was no other mentioned. Ash had issues with his family, he was supposed to be sending his father to Africa. Did he ever go? What about Mira's family? Told her dad died but what about mom and sister, cousins? What about the Granger family? What about all Mira and Ash's friends? We're left wondering about them. If you thought of this book as a tv show, they were main regular characters for ½-¾ of the way, then they are just gone without any resolution. So with the editing and then adding chapters to resolve plot points it could be an exceptional book.

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It's nice one! Good job author! The story is simple to follow, the characters are well explained. Their background too. Keeps me hooked and i want to read more so I can find more for the ml. Not really many novels can keep me interested for a long term. But it is sweet story. And the spicy time and the description for each of the characters wistes is niiicee! I just want the ml to finaly tell where and how he fell in love and the fl to find out and more sicy time to follow maybe?

The book started with interesting characters then went down hill. Ashton turned into someone else that couldn't careless about his relationship and marriage just because he's owed a favour, whereas he made sure no one got away with anything when it involved his wife. Vivi's chapters took away the feisty Mira and the cold and no nonsense CEO that didn't care about friendships when it came to Mira. Rhys planned and executed and kidnapping and had Mira for 3 days after the lake near drowning incident, that's too much credit for him even though he was just a wimp throughout. Then there's gaps of Vivi and her pregnancy, then there's aunty Yvie and uncle Cassian before the honeymoon taking care of the twins like they're a couple. It's just too much

Milujem ta láska moc sa teším sa s nim aj v spolupráci so mnou a potom sa to dalo by sa to veľmi dobrá a potom som si to vôbec nie sú k tomu ešte niečo iné a to doslova ahoj zuzi na tom istom roku ahoj maci a to som sa pýtala na dvore Mia úlohy ahoj maci a to som sa pýtala na Slovensku aj s tým rozdielom triedy v akcii a to doslova a potom sa mi to

Loving the story line. Can't wait to read more of it. Whys was an ass, putting it mildly, now Mira and Ashton look all set. I bet there are going to be a few surprises in store for all involved in the story. I'm hoping Rhys gets his comeuppance and so does Catherine as for her mum, well not sure what to say about her. Sounds like she's got some sort of complex and doesn't like Mira having something Catherine doesn't have

Well written, you don't find typos or mixed up names like you do in other stories. Nice plot, besides one incident ( you'll know which when you read it). Very much enjoying this book. A few parts of the story I would love to have had drawn out more, but overall the plot is intriguing and continues in a good flow. No tedious plot armor or repetitive scenes to add length to the book. The author doesn't over describe everything but gives enough details that I can envision it as I read.

It's so good. Though the premise may be a bit cliché, the dialogs are fast-paced and funny, and I really enjoy the characters. Especially Ashton, I mean, he's so cute I want to bite him. I'm just out here giggling at each of his POVs. The only downside for me is the fact that she still doesn't know he's in love with her. It's a bit frustrating. I just want them to finally get together for real and be all adorable.

Super! A pleasant surprise and page turner. If you’re looking for an easy read, this is for you. If you are looking for a distraction, this is for you. No long drawn out scenes, it’s snappy and decisive. The perfect way to spend a few hours, but be warned, it’s not easy to put down! I will be looking out for more of this authors work, I took a chance and very glad I did. Highly recommend!

It has a nice storyline and description of surroundings. Clear explanation of situations. Love the different points of view. The difference between the two main character's thought process about each situation. Can not wait for the moment when the characters realize their feelings for each other and she sees that she is the girl he has been stuck on for years. Also wish she wasn't stuck fighting a ex she doesn't want and that does not want her. I want his mom to let her go