HIS DEEPEST DESIRE Reviews

This was a good read. It has a lot of storytelling time and it's a little long in spots, but other than that, I would recommend that you read this. And this is one of the books that was edited a little better than a lot that I have read so far. Keep up the good work and I think this writer will get better with time.I enjoyed the book nonetheless.I will look forward to more from this writer

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This story was great! The story itself was executed very well. The only problem was the way it was written in this application. During the book several of the pages were duplicates, the correct words were not used in many sentences, and it was sometimes hard to follow given that the correct word wasn’t used. Sometimes the wrong name was used and you had to stop and think about what you were really reading. But the story itself and the way it laid out was excellent.

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This novel is riddled with horrible English. The grammar was worse than any novel I have ever read. It took everything I had to keep reading it, only because the plot and character development was excellent. It was absolutely the only reason why I kept reading. Has the author ever heard of autocorrect. Maybe if you are writing stories invest in a simple thesaurus and a basic dictionary. It makes me feel that the author is not an English speaker.

It was a good book and I liked reading a book that had no major drama for once it seems all I’m seeing hear lately are books with some kind of drama so it was good to read a book to were a boy loved a girl and a girl loved a boy and no other person was involved it was a sweet book and the ending was also nice and the fact there was an ending was terrific I seem to be choosing books w no ending so I very much enjoy this book

Honestly the novel was not that bad, the story was original, sweet and hot with unexpected plot twists and drama. It was intense and it was not too long. I was hooked on it from the beginning and I read it fast. But the minus points come from horribly bad English which made the experience of reading a lot worse. I have read several book from non English speakers with grammar mistakes but this was by far the worst, missing verbs, wrong verb tenses, mistaking words for others with totally different meaning, wro

The story was sort of interesting but it's a hard read with all the misspelling and grammar errors. I had to keep wondering if I was reading an outline or some AI slop. The "surprise twist" was also very predictable. The romance scene were lack luster as well. It just seemed like it was rushed all the way through. Finished it only because I was hoping for the writing to get better and there be at least a good ending. Highly dissatisfied.

Giovanni and Royalty are a perfect couple. Just her name is a little bit much. It was really a good story line but the repetitive sentences were getting old. Wondering if maybe a little proof reading wouldn't go a long way in improving the fluidity of the story. I'm glad Vicky and Richard ended up together. They are a good couple. I'd like to know what happened regarding her first accident and why she didn't remember giving birth to Alexander

This novel had the best story line. Creative and entertaining. I didn’t see the plot coming but I enjoyed reading this story. Unfortunately some of the writing was lost in translation but it was still good and kept me engaged and entertained. Thank you for the best writing ever. I therefore appreciate your writing style and could not put the novel down. It kept me going and made my days better. I will continue to look forward to additional writing