Hidden Marriage: He Begs for a Second Chance Reviews

It was a great story. The character development was good. I would like to see a sequel that highlights Sophia and Lucas finding love, even if it's not with eachother. And we can't forget about Liam and Henry. They deserve happiness as well. I like the fact that Elsie saw justice for her parents. Although I think she could have kept acting. I don't have anything else to say but I have to reach the 80 word minimum. But yeah good story.

I’m really enjoying this book at first I thought he was a total jerk because of the way he was treating her but then come to find out his brother was making him think and feel like his wife didn’t love him. And then he treat his wife horribly but she loved him until she realized she couldn’t love someone who kept hurting her and now he wants a second chance to love her correctly i hope she makes him for hard for her love

There are a lot of good and bad feelings the readers feel from this story. A lot of plot twists all the way to the end! It has a happy ending. I put the above statement in because a lot of people want to know how it ends before deciding rather to read it or not. I am one of those people! Lol. At times it can seem to get repetitive. But it is worth reading if you can get past that part.

So far so good. Its been good but id like a few adjustments ty This novel shows strong potential, with an engaging premise and moments of compelling storytelling that kept me invested. The characters are interesting, and the plot has a solid foundation. However, some sections feel rushed or underdeveloped, and a few scenes could benefit from clearer pacing and deeper emotional impact. With improved transitions and refinement in certain parts, this story could become truly captivating. Overall, it’s good so far, just needing thoughtful polishing.

There were some parts that just kept dragging on. Olivia was annoying. Ellie was kind. I guess that is why they make great best friends. I am glad William got it together and picked love over duty. Maybe there will be another book for Liam. He deserves love and should have a happy ending as well. Grace was just acting out because she loved wanted free from her family and could never catch a break. Overall this was a good story to read.

Enjoyed the story from start to end.It was a good story with several plot and twist.I enjoyed how it ends too.Recomended . The best part of all I didn't need to pay to read the whole story but instead be patient in unlocking ads and coins.Thank you for writing a story with good vocabulary and Grammar instead of some which is like copy and paste from ChatGpt with storyline that is all over the place. Major love with the main character William and partner.

This was one the best novels I’ve read on this app. The story between William and Elsie was so heartwarming. The heartbreak they both went through because of a huge misunderstanding and finding forgiveness after they resolved the issue. It was amazing how William loved Elsie and didn’t have a problem showing it. Loved his character the quick wittiness of his mouth, never one to sugarcoat anything even if they were his friends. Happy Elsie got justice for her parents. It was an absolutely an amazing story.

So far this novel is pretty good! Although it’s a long one I’m roped in, I just have to know what’s gonna happen. The storyline is interesting and makes you hopeful while still surprising you along the way. I like that there is a bit of a backstory from about multiple characters. It broadens the details of each character and their story but didn’t spend too much time on it. While the pass of the drama and climax of the story is a bit slower for my taste, it is still a good plot and I would recommend this read.

Good story, keeps you turning the page. Will she take him back? Will she really walk away? Just keep turning the page to find out 😉 I want the coins but I have to give you 80 words min. Does the periods count. Nope. Lol. Seriously though it's a bit frustrating having to buy coins or watch 3 ads just to get coins. This will definitely be the last book from this site. I will be deleting the app once I'm done this story. Cheers

William thought the Elsie Was in love with Liam because when they got married they were happy on their honeymoon. Grace believed that Elsie stole William from her. But Elsie was the one who whole heartedly loved William, but he misunderstood her. So he stayed away for 3 years by then it was hard on their marriage. They signed the divorce papers but William does not want the divorce That is as far As I got But he is pursuing her to get her to give him a second chance. Cannot wait until I read the novel.