Daughter-in-law strikes harder Reviews

Still waiting for story to move along but it’s not really getting there but some of the chapters are good so hopefully it’s going to get better but it’s hard going Characters are barely there unless it’s the main character but there is too much of the other characters which bogs down the story and wasted time reading Will be giving this novel a few chapters more before abandoning it Hopefully it gets the story together first

I really liked the book. But the writer could use a few tools to help them improve their writing. Tools like a proofreader, editor and spellchecke, these would make the book even more enjoyable. Sadly I had to re-read chapters just to figure out who they were talking about, due to mixed up names. The book was full of drama and unfortunately lots of violence, but seemed to have a happy ending. I say seemed to... because it ended so abruptly, leaving me confused and wanting more.

I am not too far into the story but based off of what I have read so far, I love it! It is well written, I say that because a few other stories I have read have been organized strangely or there is major typos and things just are not translating clearly to me, I like to read a story without having to assume what they meant. Overall though, like I said before, I love it! I would recommend reading this one. It has me intrigued and wanting to unlock more chapters!