Damian Black Reviews

One of the most well written pieces I've ever read and the most intriguing storyline. At the beginning I thought it was one of those typical storylines about the rich and their hunger to always be in control, but I was quickly convinced otherwise. A beautiful love story about family and how fulfilling it is to have something to hold so dear. This is a true reflection of how love can change a man's perspective in life. Damian has become a softy because he found love and he has become a human being, not the machine that was described at the beginning of the book. His relationship with his brothers is also something to marvel about. Despite their different characters, they are always there for each other. I would have loved to see them in relationships as well and finding happiness like their brother did. It would have been nice to add a chapter about what was brewing between Damon and Harper. I'm also fascinated about how strong Adylains character is. A charming, strong and reliable person through and through. A force of nature. She's too perfect. And she tamed Damian into a family man. That was beautiful to watch. I feel it ended too quickly. But overall, a beautiful love story ❤️ 😍 💕. Maybe a sequel to this can be possible. There are things that were not explained fully, like what Harris meant when he said Damian has made similar messes like the one he made trying to rescue his wife, and what Dorians heart condition had to do with anything. The storyline was introduced to us but I couldn't make out why it was added.

I love the vibe of this book. It kept me on the edge of my chair at times and I could not put it down. It kept me up all night reading which was in my eyes worth every minute of it. I especially liked the ending where they have the baby and the epilogue was refreshing talking about there lives after everything that transpired after then the baby’s first word being dadda was fitting and for Damian to be there to hear it was the icing on the cake. Good book

This was a good story, it ended leaving a LOT of questions unanswered. What was going on with Dorian? Did Harper know about his heart condition? Was there something going on between them? Now that Adalyn and Damian fulfilled the contact do they have a real wedding they are going on a honeymoon but no mention of a wedding. What other chaos did Damain cause? There were quite a few things that Adalyn took note of and said to address them at a later time but never did.

This story was well put and beautiful. The way their love developed even though it starts off with the contract was cute! Like every relationship there had to be some sort of misunderstanding but I’m glad that Damian reflected and was able to apologize to Adalyn and Damon. Great way to show this was an eye opener for Damian to realized that it was important to open his heart and let down all the walls he had up. Loved it!!

I really enjoyed this book. It’s well written has a few surprises. With interesting characters and decent dialogue. I certainly would like a continuation of the story. Would love to know how the honeymoon went. Did they have more kids? What happened between Dorian and Harper? At any rate will there be a sequel? I like everybody else will just have to wait for the answer to that question. In the meantime it’s now time to start another story

Very nice story, with interesting and believable characters. Also easy to read without any funny happenings to force a longer story. On the whole well written with a few irritations. The writer often seems to forget what she wrote a few chapters ago and then contradicts herself. The timeline is also questionable, with the pregnancy moving from about 4 months to 8 1/2 months in a few weeks, and an unexplained few weeks between the birth and getting back home from the hospital. Worth reading but would definately improve with a decent rewrite.

Pretty good story! I definitely think the character development could have been a little stronger. Loved the plot, but would have liked more back story. Perhaps further character development in a sequel and or prequel. I would love to know what happens to Damon, Dorian and Harper’s backstory. What about more kids for Adalyn and Damian? How did Adalyn grow up? So many questions that could be answered in a prequel or two. All in all, worth the time and ad viewing!

This book is so indescribable even for a book that's so short it's starts as the rest but the end is mind blowing. Just with how they could write this much in less the 60 pages is awesome. I love the boss and assistant vibe it's giving🥰 just the fact that Damian who was cold and aloof can become the perfect man. You know what they say even a rock can bleed. And the way she fitted into his life is so outstanding evfn though she was his assistant for years she fitted next to him like someone who were made for him

This was an excellent story but still needed better editing. This book like a lot of internet books have grammer, spelling, and punctuation errors. This detracts from the story but are easy to find and correct with a native speaker reading the text. Also the layout after the chapters was distracting, to many lines between paragraphs just t macke the chapters seem longer. Also the cost for the book is over what it costs for a paperback which can be reread or given to another reader.

Just finished the book. It was a sweet and satisfying read. I appreciate a shorter novel sometimes because you get to the happily ever after more quickly without endless drama after drama or conflict after crisis. Happy to see these two find their way to each other and complete their lives together. Nothing like a little contract to make two people realize they cannot live without one another. I hope there might be sequels about the brothers coming soon. Fingers crossed.