Babysitting Mr. Powers' Daughter. Reviews

Very nice written story. Few confusing moments but didn't interrupt reading. Overall happy, would read author books again. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

This was a great story! I enjoyed all the twist and turns. I loved the drama with danger thrown in. He sounded so scrumptious, and on top of that, was rich. I figure that the story line was within a two to three year period. I was a little confused about how they were so desperate that they had to get married that day, because they couldn't wait anymore after all that time. The desperation confused me, but it also made this romance sexier!

I know this Story is quite old but i really loved it. There were some Cliffhanger but it was lovley! I liked both main caracters. Grace Was a 'no-sh*t girl and k loved that too. It was a great Twist that sam had a look alike sister. Who have thought that? Me definitly not! Dominic was a lovley man with some quirks.. the only thing that i do not really liked was, that he changed so fast and listened to grace. And ruby was great! Thanks for zhe book

I absolutely loved Babysitting Mr. Powers' Daughter. Grace’s leap into this luxurious world for a simple babysitting job quickly turned into a powerful, emotional journey. Dominic Powers, brooding and mysterious, and his adorable daughter Ruby kept me drawn in—and the chemistry between Grace and Dominic was both heartfelt and magnetic. I laughed at the tender moments with Ruby and root-ed for their growing bond. The story’s pace felt just right, even when minor elements (like Dominic’s family backstory) felt briefly underexplored. Overall, it was a sweet, romantic escape that warmed my heart and lifted my spirits.

Great story. Great storytelling. The end was a little anticlimactic. Questions are let unanswered would love a bonus chapter or two. The story ended abruptly. Sandra, his mother, the doctor, Ruby. I would love an extra chapter or two to end the story. Anyway, it was fun and cute, good twists and turns. The ending was the only part I didn’t throughly enjoy. I needed more. I hope that the author will continue the story a bit so that those questions are answered.

I haven't gotten to read very far into the book yet, but so far it is enjoyable. I like the storyline and characters, and how descriptive the author is. I thought the very beginning of the book was rather comical and reminded me of my reckless youth 😅 As for the ending -- I've seen mixed reviews about it feeling a bit rushed, but I plan to continue reading it since the rest has been good.

The story had very good potential, although it was short; the author took her time to make sure it was well written. I would’ve wished that some parts had been more elaborate when describing them, especially this being an 18+ story. I would’ve like to see especially the end of the story not to feel so rushed, I felt that after they discovered that Ruby was kidnapped everything was kind of rushed in. I would’ve wished to know more about Dominic’s mom, especially since she was introduced at the end, what was her reasoning for abandoning them. How did uncle Stanley received the news of meeting Grace? Overall well written, and interesting!

Pretty good story. The pain and trauma that precedes the two main characters meeting is not as devastating as some stories I have read and the flow into a relationship seemed easier than most. I don’t understand the writers motive to bring the male character mother in at the end of the story there was no rhyme or reason for it other than to traumatize the dad into the hospital, which makes no sense to the story at all.

The first thing that comes to mind is that the name of the novel which attracted the attention of the readers. The author is very intelligent in describing the characters and scenes which makes the reader imagine the whole thing in a very good way. I like the novel and I am very keen to read the rest of the chapters to discover what will happen next. I will also recommend reading this book to my friends and colleagues. Thank you

The book was good. The plot definitely has lots of potential, but I feel like the writing does not do it full justice. Proofreading and editing is required. There are lots of holes in the story, and as many of the comments on the last chapter stated, the ending felt rushed, there are many unanswered questions. There also seemed to have been a massive time jump of two years, with no explanation or glimpse of what happened within that time. However, it was a super cute love story with some interesting twists overall. All the best with your other works!