Accidentally Married Reviews

Awwwww I totally loved this. I literally binge read it in 2 days and just could not put it down. Fabulous job on keeping the storyline suspenseful. I was on the edge of my seat for some sections and then got some sections I was most in tears. I can't believe how vile Jessica's aunt was. And when she got kidnapped I cried like she was my family. I love the story build up between Jessica and Xavier. Amazing job.

I enjoyed how the love story played out. It was sad to lose Dawson before the baby was born though. I liked the way the author played out the story and it pretty much kept my attention ( I practically binge read!) With that said I do have a few negative comments. My biggest complaint is about the proofreading. Or lack of it. It was terrible. There should not have been that many errors, from saying the wrong character to words misspelled or misused. At times I couldn’t even figure out what the word was supposed to be. I also think the amount of money it took to read the book was on the high end. To have to continually read so many errors was aggravating and if I didn’t enjoy the story as much as I did I would have stopped reading it. .

It is a good read. Jessica is falling for her husband and he is falling for her. He just can not see it now. She is being kind to everyone even him. What will he do if she stops cooking for him? He can tell she is not with him for his money. Plus he needs to grow up some. Maybe the Grandpa can convince him to take her on the honeymoon she deserves. Then maybe they will for in love.

I have been pulled right into this story. They definitely both have feelings forming for each other and the lack of communication seems to be pretty realistic (in some relationships) ha ha I love Jessica and I am rooting for them! Dawson is a favorite too. Too adorable. I can not decide about Leslie yet… I think she likes Jessica. I am just hoping she doesn’t use her to gain a different place in their society. It’s giving Beauty and The Beast vibes :)

So, here is how I feel about this story. I’m really enjoying the story line. The characters are interesting and have the ability to grow to be more interesting. The problem I am having is that the grammar is atrocious. I understand that it is probably because whoever wrote, English is probably not their primary or first language. That being said, I feel like it should be edited a bit. I can only read a few minutes at a time because of the grammar. Good story though.

Absolutely enjoyed the book. I loved the way they finally admitted their love for each other. I also liked the fact that there were two aunts both bad apples but becoming good in the end. When you added the kidnappers it added mystery and diversity. I thought the other couples were a bit strange but they ended up being okay. Her ex friend was a horrible character but I think sometimes you need that to make the story more interesting.

I love the plot of the story, however the poor English, typo’s, spelling and tense errors are abundant. This book should have been edited before it was published on line. The two man characters are annoyed at each other most of the time, which is starting to get old. I am wondering when are they going to start getting along and fall in love with each other? Move this story along before we all lose interest and end our subscriptions.

Other than some typing errors, the story flows really well. I think it was important that all aspects of what was happening was explained by each character. I liked that it doesn’t have to tell you what character speaking because of the flow in the writing. I enjoy this story and thought it to be one of the more realistic novels. I’ve read so far. I recommend it and I don’t recommend very many. Especially like the way they made the female character, strong, intelligent, and the force to be reckoned with. No damsel in distress here, she knew what she wanted and what was going to make her happy and she was not afraid to go after it.

Good story !! Hope you write a second book. Readers would love to read about the kids growing up . Your characters were interesting. Read the book in one day. Needs a lot of edits. Can tell that ai was used to write book. Sometimes the story did not make sense, but because the people were so likable, I didn’t want it to end. It was also nice to have the personal interjections when talking about the tough situations . I did not want anyone to die.

I absolutely love this story!!! The suspense of will they or won’t is killing me!! lol but I’m hooked since I seen it! Xavier’s character is very complex , I hope he opens up soon. Jessica’s character is so sweet and genuine I hope she can work with our boy Xavier lol. And Dawson is hilarious I love the whole match maker vibes. I really hope he doesn’t dies . It would be so sad, I Can’t wait to see how it ends😌😌😌.