
The Mafia Kings Plaything
- Genre: Romance
- Penulis: Marie Jessette
- Bab: 172
- Status: Selesai
- Rating usia: 18+
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Deskripsi
"You think you have a choice?" Vittorio squeezed my waist with his hand and my sanity with the other. “ You were never going to be anyone else's from the moment I set eyes on you”. His voice a deadly whisper His words cut through me, making my chest tighten with fear "You’re Ours, kitten," he continued, his gaze locking onto mine and stealing the breath from my lungs. "You will be claimed and used however I see fit. Do you understand?" "I... I understand," I whispered, feeling my resistance crumble under his dark, green eyes. "You will lay before me, Katarina," he commanded in a low growl. "Show me how desperate you are for me." Katarina Delgado was supposed to belong to another man. Sold like property to Mafia Don Giordano, her virginity was payment for a debt her father couldn't afford. But when her brother Mateo tries to save her and fails, she ends up in the hands of a deadlier monster: Vittorio De Luca, the brutal mafia king who cages her, collars her, and whispers filth like love. Now, locked in a war between cartels, Katarina is the prize. But not just for Vittorio. Valentino De Luca, his missing twin, has returned. Sharper. Slower. Unhinged. And he doesn’t want to steal her. He wants to share her. Together. In a world of cages, kings, and betrayal, the only thing more dangerous than being wanted… is being wanted by both of them.
Tina Reid
Two words to describe this story - CONVOLUTED and CONTRADICTORY. It's convoluted because there are hundreds of different story threads tangling around each other making knots and loose threads. A story should be a tapestry, all the story threads weaving together to eventually create a picture. When you look back at this story you see all the ( plot) holes and loose threads dangling with no answers to why those threads were included in the first place. It's also contradictory because so many times we are given another character's POV on the previous scene and it is so different to the 1st POV it's like it was written by someone else who didn't bother to read what was previously written. There is a pointless character in the 1st half of the story who has disassociative personality disorder and this story reads like it was written by him and his alternatives. This story should have been read, revised and edited by the author themselves before publishing on this app.
August 16, 2026
